Tagebuch einer Klassenfahrt nach London

Ich muss in Englisch einen Tagebuch über unsere Londonfahrt schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob jemand den ersten Tag Korrektur liest. Danke.

Dear Diary, Today we started our trip from ....to London. It was a long journey, but the bus was fantastic. We met in front of our school at 4.45 am. Everybody of us was excited because the day of the departure had arrived. At 5.00 am we started our trip to London. We drove through Germany, the Netherlands, Belgium and France. First we thought, the drive would be very boring, but it wasn't. Our bus ride was very funny. We sung many songs together, listened to music and played games. In Calais we took the ferry to Dover. The passage was about 1 hour long. The size of the ferry and the view of deck fascinated me. At about 21.30 pm we arrived at Maidenhead. All host mums and dads waited there and the students in the bus were getting excited. Everybody thought which mom is my mom?orI want to have this dad. We got our pogs and waited. We waited and waited. .....and me got nervous. We got to know our mum, Mrs. .....and her child, and drove to her flat. The flat was nice. Small, but new fixtures. In the living room our mum introduced her son to us and told about her family. Their son, is five years old and her husband is at the moment in Germany to the army. She herself comes from Somalia and lives for 7 years in London. Also we told about our families and the bus ride. At 11 pm .... and me went to bed. Everybody had his own room. It was a hard day for us and we only wanted to sleep! Although I am very tired, I still can't sleep. I hope my second day in London will be very good. Good night!

Englisch, Schule, Tagebuch
Royal Flying Doctors Service----
           Royal Flying Doctors Service

The Royal Flying Doctors Service or short RFDS is a health care service for people in Australia who live in the outback. It is a not- for- profit organisation which provides health care to people who are unable to access a hospital or general practice because of the vast distances of the Outback. They come by plane and help the people or in many cases they also provide telephone or radio medical advice to them. RFDS is working 24 hours the whole year. The Royal Flying Doctor Service supports virtually all low populated areas of Australia. It can arrive each person of Australia within two hours. It has 53 planes at 21 bases across the country. Almost thousand people work there, a professional team. They using the latest in aviation, medical and communications technology, it has four operational sections, South Eastern, Central, Western and Queensland. Each section has a number of bases. Royal Flying Doctors Service helps people for over 80 years. The first flight was 1928. They supported by the Commonwealth, State and Territory Governments. The donations will be used in several ways to help the thousands of people who live, work and travel in Australia. People who are not affirmed must pay for treatment themselves. People who are affirmed don’t have to pay for treatment themselves.

ist das so richtig geschrieben? vielen dank im voraus!!!

Englisch, Schule
postkarte auf englisch berichtigen

Hallo :) Also ich schreibe am Freitag eine Englisch arbeit & ein teil davon wird sein eine postkarte oder brief (e-mail) auf englisch über new york zu schreiben. Ich bin aber ziemlich schlecht in freien texten schreiben. Ich hab mir als übung schon etwas vorgeschrieben, damit ich in der arbeit nicht hoffnunglos da stehe. Leider weiß ich nur nicht ob das alles so richtig ist.

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Dear Anne,

We stay in New York for a week. It's very big and it's one of the best places I have ever seen in my live. Here are so big buildings like skyscrapers and the empire state building! Anne you don't believe me, but i know what I write. We were there. On the empire state building. The view is too brilliant for words! You can look over the whole city! It's incredibly great. At Wednesday we were in the central park. It's so beautiful there. I must show you my photos, witch I have taken there, when I’m home again. But know I’m still in New York for 4 days more. Oh and I was in china town yesterday. It's so crazy there. The people are very funny. At least we were driving at our hotel with the subway. That wasn’t so funny. There were lots of people and tourists who push me. i was happy as we were back at the hotel... Tomorrow we will look at the statue of liberty and at the last day, we will go to the stores on fifth avenue. We will go window shopping there ;). For buy it cost too much money :(. I miss you, Marie:*

Wäre nett wenn sich das jemand mal durchlesen könnte und mir meine fehler mitteilen könnte :)

Danke schon mal im vorraus LG Marie

Englisch, Schule
welcher dieser kurzreferate über ist am besten?

hier die kurzreferate:

  1. Washington D.C. is the capital of the United States of America. There is also the government from the USA. The USA consist of 50 states and Washington the Distict of Columbia. Washington D.C. has got an exceptional position and so you can say it belongs to a state.It´s about 180 km” and has got about 575.000 inhabitans. The city is named Washington because the first president was George Washington. The river Potomac, Virginia and Maryland border Washington. There you can find about five universities, this are the famous ones: Georgetown University, established 1975, die George Washington University, established 1821 und die Howard University, established 1867. You also can find many museums, churchs, libarys, theatres and many famous monuments like the “White House”. All presidents of the USA lived in this house. The Capitol is the place for the congresses. This building should be the highest in Washinton D.C. Because of this there are no sky- scrapers. But there are two building which are higher than the Capitol. This is the Washinton Monument ( a monument for their first president) and the tower of the old Post Office. But these buildings where built before they said that the Capitol must to be the highest.
  2. Sights of New York New York has many sights, 500 galerys, about 150 museums, more than 100 theaters, many department stores and more than 17000 restaurantes. The most sights are at Manhattan for example the Fifth Avenue. It is one of the famousest streets of the world. The Figth Avenue is a symbole for the rich New York. There are a lot ofsights for example the Empire State Building, St. Patrick´s Cathedral, York Public Library and so on. Also there are many famouse shops for fashion and cosmetic for exemple Lacost, Armani, Versace and so on.The Empire State Building is on of the famousest sights in New York. It is 433 meters high and is on of the highest buildings in the world. It has 102 sticks. You can come with on of 70 elevators or by foot 1800 steps to the observation platform (aussichtsplatform). Every year came about 3 milion tourists to these buildin. When you appear you can see 100 kilometers far. The Brookly Bridge is the link from Manhattan to Brooklyn. Hundrets of athletes are going every day over it, but also walkers (spaziegänge) cars, busses and motorbiks. It is 1091 meters long. John Roebling had´the idea to build that brige. 1869 they begun to build it and end 1882. The highest building in New York were the world Trade Centers. The Noeth Tower was 417 meter high and the south tower was 415 meters high. But at the 11.September.2004 they were destroyed by a terrorist attack (terroranschlag). Two plains flew betweeen the 78. and zhe 84. stick in the towers then they fell down. 2.819 people died. Now there is the Ground Zero. The Statue of Liberty is 46,5 meters high. Frederic Auguste Bartholdi outlined (entwurf) it. It stands in Bedloe´s Island.

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Englisch, Kurzarbeit, Referat, New York, Washington DC

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