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Hallo, ich soll ein Referat über die Tower Bridge halten dass ungefähr 8-10 min dauern sol bis jetzt habe ich das hier. Tower Bridge

I`d like to tell you something about Tower Bridge in London, because Tower Bridge is one of the famoust sights in London. Here are some photos.

Originally, London Bridge was the only crossing over the Thames. As London grew, so more bridges were added, but these were all to the west of London Bridge, since the area east of London Bridge had become a busy port.

The big problem for the Corporation of London was how to build a bridge downstream from London Bridge without handicape the shipping to get as many ideas as possible, the “Special Bridge or Subway Commitee” was formed in 1876.

In October 1884 Sir Horace Jones designed the bridge, Sir John Wolfe Barry, 5 constractors and 432 construction workers build the Tower Bridge in eight years.

Two massive piers had to be sunk into the river bed to support the construction. About 11ooo tons of steel provided the frame for Towers and Walkways. When it was built, Tower Bridge was the largest bridge ever built, the bridge is 244 meters long. The style of this building is called ,, neo-Gothic style”.

Nowadays, the bascules are still operated by hydraulic power, but since 1976 they replace by oil and electricity rather than steam. When a big ship is coming along the Thames, the workers on the Bridge had to open the bridge streets in 9o seconds. This happens 500 times a year.

In the two towers there are 300 steps to reach the Tower Bridge Exhibition where you can enjoy a view from the high-level Walkways and learn about the history of the bridge and how it was built. The Tower Bridge walkways have specially designed windows.

This were some information about Tower Bridge, the famoust bridge in London.

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Englisch, Argumentation, Verbessern?

Hallo, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und habe schon ein paar Argumentationen geschrieben. Heute hat meine Lehrerin einen Hinweis auf das Thema gegeben: Volunteer work. Ich habe dann einfach mal eine Argumentation dazu geschrieben. Wahrscheinlich kommt nicht nur Volunteer work dran, aber es wäre toll, wenn ich schon eine gute Grundlage habe. Ich weiß das ich bestimmt ein paar Grammatische Fehler habe.

Volunteer work is a important for the poor, disadvantaged groups or teenagers (youth centre) or generel the society, but also people don't like this kind of work, why? Is volunteer work useful? Mostly volunteer work deal with people, for example you ask for donation, like money, eat or clothes. Subsequently people don't like this question, because they think its annoying or maybe the organisation is not serious. In the past some organisations has use the money for his own and now people aren't sure, if the organisation approved or serious. Thats why you can feel depressed, because you do this at your free time and you are not paid for your work. On the one hand, people don't like your work, but on the other hand you can help the society, also when some people don't honor your work, but it gives also people, who think thats a good job and honourable. Furthermore you can feel good by your own and you can say, you help people who needs help and don't see away (nicht weg sehen?). Additionally you can gain experience for a job or the life. In a CV it looks very good. So also your character can be better, for example you know the real problems, like no food or money to live. Then you see, thats your problems are nothing in comparison with this problems. Finally in my opinion volunteer work is important and I do this also and when somebody say something bad about your work. Ignor this! There more people who like it and especially the people who need your work.

Ich würde mich auf eine Antwort freuen und ich weiß eure Mühe zu schätzen, wenn ihr es korrigiert und mir vielleicht ein paar Tipps geben könnt. Ich hoffe es antwortet noch jemand heute. Aber trotzdem danke!

Englisch, Schule, verbessern, Argumentation

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