Ist mein Titanic Referat auf Englisch so gut?
Ich muss ein kurzes Referat halten (so 3-5 min). Ich weiß aber nicht ob mein Text jetzt so gut ist, oder ob er zu kurz ist. Bestimmt habe ich aber auch Rechtschreibung oder Grammatik Fehler. Bitte um Berichtigung. Danke schon mal im Voraus :)
Titanic The RMS Titanik was the largest passenger ship of its time and was called the ``unsinkable´´ ship or the ship of dreams. It was built 1909- the 02. April 1912. It was 269 m long, and 28 m wide. The mayden voyage started on the 10th of April 1912 in Southampton in England and should have ended in New York. Many passengers wanted to start a new and better life in New York. On the 4th day of its voyage the titanic hit an iceberg. The ship started to fill with water and the crew started to broadcast S.O.S. Panik broke out. The lifeboats should be taken with 64 people but in most boats sat only 32. The lifeboats reached only for half of the passengers. After 3 terrible hours full of panic and screaming people the titanic sank. Only 700 people survived and the other 1500 people fell in the cold North Atlantic and died a cruel deat. Most passengers who had died were from the third class even the captain he didn´t want to leave the ship. In 1985 the wreck of the titanic was discovered by a Friench-American expedition.
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Titanic
The RMS Titanik was the largest passenger ship of its time and was called the ``unsinkable´´ ship or the ship of dreams. It was built hier fehlt eine Präpostion 1909 - Wort ausschreiben
(---) 02. April 1912. It was 269 m long kein Komma and 28 m wide. The mayden voyage started on the (wird nur gesprochen, nicht geschrieben) 10th of (wird nur gesprochen, nicht geschrieben) April 1912 in Southampton in England (Ort vor Zeit) and should have ended in New York. Many passengers wanted to start (ich würde begin vorziehen) a new and better life in New York. On the 4th day of its voyage the titanic hit an iceberg. The ship started to fill with water and the crew started to (Wiederholung)
broadcast S.O.S. hier fehlt ein Linking Word Panik broke out. The lifeboats should be taken with 64 people but in most boats hier fehlt etwas sat only 32. The lifeboats reached only for half of the passengers. After 3 terrible hours full of panic and screaming people Komma
the titanic sank. Only 700 people survived and the other 1,500 people fell in the cold North Atlantic and died a cruel deat. Most passengers who had died were from the third class even the captain he didn´t want to leave the ship (Word Order). In 1985 Komma the wreck of the titanic was discovered by a Friench-American expedition.
Ob das für 3 - 5 Minuten ausreicht, kannst du vor dem Spiegel, deinen Freunden oder deiner Familie ausprobieren. Ich könnte mir aber vorstellen, dass der Text zu kurz ist.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
AstridDerPu
Nicht S.O.S sonder C.Q.D, da man sich erst kurze Zeit vor dem Unglück zu S.O.S entschiden hatte.
Sonst Gut!
LG