bitte helfen, englisch?
hey, morgen habe ich eine Präsentation in Englisch über 'the vampire diaries', doch 1. bin ich toootaall aufgeregt wie immmer, denn das ist meine letzte Chance die Note zu verbesser und 2. bin ich mir nicht sicher ob das gut ist.., könnt ihr mir bitte helfen :o
THE VAMPIRE DIARIES
The Vampire Diaries is a drama television serie developed by Kevin Williamson and Julie Plec, which is based on the book series of the same name. The protagonists are Nina Dobrev alias Elena, Paul Wesley alias Stefan and Ian Sommerhalder alias Damon. Elena and her brother Jeremy (who's played by Steven R. McQueen) lost their parents by a car accident. One day Elena meets the new boy of her Highschool, Stefan. In his 'Vampire' Diary he share his feelings about Elena. She feels attracted to him too. For her he stopped drinking blood of humans. But it happens strange things, people get attacked and killed. Then his brother and enemie damon appear, and the life of Stefan and the Mystic Falls change..
On September 10, 2009 started the serie with over 5 Million viewers.
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Naja, Gramatik is teilweise n bischen komisch und auch inhaltlich sind n paar kleine fehler drin....ich habs dir mal umgeschrieben:
The Vampire Diaries is a drama television series by Kelvin Wiliiamson and Julie Plec, based on the book "The Vampire Diaries" by (von wem das buch geschrieben wird).
The protagonists are Nina Dobrev as Elena Gilbert, Paul Westley as Stefan Salvatore and Ian Sommerhalder as Damon Salvatore.
Elena and her younger brother Jeremy (acted by Steven R. McQueen) lost their parents because of a car accident.
When Elena one day met the new student Stefan Salvatore she fall in love with him. But he has a dark secrit: He's a vampire and over 100 years old. He and Elena start a relationship, but she doesn't know anything about his secrit...
Strage Things are happening in Mystic Falls, people get attacked or die, because of too less blood in their body.
Stefan wants to find out, who's killing all the humans and meet his older brother Damon who is realy angry with him and his life is going to be changed hardly...
On September 10th, 2009 startet the series on the (amerikanischem sender) CW with over 5 mio viewers. (hier solltest du noch mehr fakten bringen. zb: welche auszeichnungen die serie bekommen hat.....ect...)
hoffe konnte dir helfen :)
ganz gut aber das ist ein bisschen zu wenig