Hallo. Kann jemand bitte mal meine Englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren? Wäre echt nett. Liebe Grüße, und danke schon mal :)

Teenagers on streets 15-year-olds children will go out between 9pm and 6am. But should they be allowed to be on streets between 9pm and 6am? Some people say that children can go out between 9pm and 6am. They can meet her friends, have more freetime and they can d more with their friends, for example go to the cinema. However, other people disagree. One common reason is because they think the children shout be attacked. Another argument against 15-year-olds children should be on the streets at 9pm and 6am is, that the children could be robbed, or that the children have to little sleep. Or so children could be kidnapped for a man or so. In my opinion, it´s okay when 15-year-olds children go longer out at weekend. But all in all you can say it´s better when children stay at home between 9pm and 6am.