Englischunterricht – die neusten Beiträge

Englisch?

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

When we arrived there on the second day, we had to go to our maintenance groups immediately. On that day, there was another specialist, so we had to introduce ourselves to her. After introducing, we got two sheets of paper. On the first one, there was only an eye and on the second one, there was a whole face. She said we had to paint makeup on both the eye and the face. In my opinion, my pictures were very ugly and it was very difficult for me because I can‘t draw well and I have never worn makeup before. After that, we grabbed our hairdressing heads which still had curlers in their hair and we had to remove them. They needed to be left in their hair overnight so that a volume winding would form. Luckily, it worked! Then we had to create our own hairstyle on our hairdressing head. The specialist said my hairstyle was pretty good. Then we could style and wash each other‘s hair again and X wanted to try  volume winding again as it didn‘t work on the previous day. On that day, it definitely worked better but she had to dry her hair with a hair dryer for about one hour because her hair was still too wet to remove the curlers from her hair. I was so sorry for her. Finally, she did it after one hour and her hair looked gorgeous, so in my opinion it was worth it. In the last 50 minutes, we could wear makeup but of course I didn‘t want, so I observed my classmates again. On the one hand, I think I could work as a hairdresser in future because it‘s interesting what customers tell you while I‘m styling their hair and it‘s also interesting to try out different hairstyles but on the other hand, this job doesn‘t match to me  because I‘m scared of doing mistakes because for example I could cut off a customer‘s hair and I don‘t want to touch stranger‘s hair. 

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Englisch?

Hallo, könnte sich jemand bitte meinen Text anschauen (vor allem Grammatik). Vorab will ich sagen, dass es um einen Tag in einem Bildungszentrum geht.

,,When we hadn‘t arrived yet, I was really scared because I had thought that it would be similar to my internship in March. But when I arrived there, I wasn‘t scared anymore because the specialists greeted us in a very friendly way. We all were standing there while the specialist was telling us where we were going to work in the following two days. I was in the maintenance group which was called cosmetic. I don‘t have anything to with cosmetic at all because I still don‘t paint my nails, wear make-up and so on, so I thought that it would be fun. When we came into the special room, we first watched a video about safety- and hygiene measures. Then we started working. We got a hairdressing head and curles because we had to do a volume winding. It was pretty difficult for me because I had never done it before in my life. Luckily, the specialist helped me and I did it alone after that! Next, we could paint our nails and do a manicure. I didn‘t do anything because I neither wanted to paint my nails nor a manicure because as I said, I am not interested in painting my nails. I was only observing my classmates who were painting their nails, yet it was very interesting because they they were hilarious. After that, we were allowed to wash each other‘s hair and also to do a hairstyle by using for example a hair curler and straightener. We washed X‘s hair and we did her a volume winding. Sadly, it didn’t work because we did it wrongly.“

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Was ist eure Meinung zur folgenden Englisch-Klausuraufgabe?

ist die folgende Mediation gelungen?:

Hello,

So as we are working on a joint project on unequal distribution of income, I have come upon on an interesting article in the "Stern" magazine. The author Walter Wüllenberg states his profound opinion about the class mobility in Germany and how this has changed in the last years. In the following I will point out the main arguments and their argumentation.

Firstly, the author states, that the German inequality of class is not comparable to the American Class inequality, as the German discussion about class was about the under class and their immobility, whereas the US discussion about class was always accomplished by the prolific idea of the American Dream. This shows in the social spendings of Germany too, spending more than half of the income of the estate, incomparable to the US with only a fifth of theirs.

Henceforth, the author states that the class inequality in Germany much rather shows in the not existing middle class than in the poor estate of the under class. While economy has grown hugely in the last decades, the wages have nearly stagnated, showing that economies growth could not bared by society as a whole but only by the rich. Thus, the rich have gotten immensely richer, owning most of the capital of the country, and the rest just held their class. Yet the divide between the classes has grown and their nearly is no in between. This is worth the criticism because the growth of the economy is due to the work of the society as a whole, yet only few bear the fruits of the hard work, being quite unfair.

I hope that this has helped you and that it may have provoked some thoughts considering inequality. I would like to hear from you.

GaLIGrü, 

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Englisch?

Sind die Sätze richtig übersetzt?

1. Ich surfe gerne im Internet, um Informationen zu finden. *I enjoy surfing the Internet to find information*

2. Manchmal denke ich darüber nach, wie es wäre, ein Album zu erstellen. *Sometimes I think about how it would be like to create an album*

3. Beim Einkaufen bis zum Umfallen sollte man auf Sonderangebote achten. •You should look out for sales at/when shopping till you drop* (Geht beides?)

4. Vor dem Kauf probiere ich die Kleidung gerne in der Umkleidekabine an. *Before a purchase I like trying on the clothes in the fitting room*

5. An der Kasse bezahle ich dann bar und erhalte eine Quittung. *I pay in cash and receive a receipt at the cash register*

6. Beim Shoppen denke ich oft an die Etiketten und das Etikettieren. When shopping I often think of labels and labelling (BE) *

7. Es macht Spaß, mal etwas Neues auszuprobieren und nicht immer dasselbe zu tun. *It is fun to try out something new and not to always do the same things*

8. Beim Abhängen mit Freunden kann man auch mal laut lachen und verrückte Dinge tun. *When hanging out with friends you can also laugh out loud and do crazy things*

9. Nach dem Einkauf schaue ich mir gerne alles an und überprüfe die Qualität. *After shopping I like checking out everything and checking out the quality.*

10. Es ist wichtig, sich an die Regeln im Fußball, Boxen oder Eishockey zu halten. *It is important to follow the rules in football, boxing, or ice hockey*

11. In der Halbzeitpause kann man sich einen Drink gönnen und entspannen. * During half time, you can drink something and relax *

12. Der Schiedsrichter und der Linienrichter überwachen das Spielgeschehen. *the referee and the linesman oversee the game*

13. Bei einer Verletzung sollte sofort ein Sanitäter gerufen werden. *In case of an injury, a paramedic should be called immediately*

14. Beim Vorstellen sollte man sich kurz fassen und das Wichtigste über sich sagen. When introducing yourself, you should do it shortly and say the most important facts about you*

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Englisch text?

Hallo, könnt ihr mir bitte den Text korrigieren?

Meet Angelina, a wonderful and spirited girl in our class. Angelia is 13 years old and her birthday is in September. Summer is her favourite season, because her birthday is in summer and she loves the warm weather with the sunshine. she loves swimming in the swimming-pool with her friends and her brothers and sisters.

 

One fact about her is that she makes everybody laughing, even if when the person doesn’t want to laugh. She is very kind, creative and helpful. And she loves animals so much. She is a very big animal lover. That’s one reason why she has 3 dogs and 5 rabbits. She also has been riding horses for a long time.

 

Her hobbys are very cool! She is in love with playing soccer and she is very good. Angelia is in the goal and is holding the balls. Her favourite club is FC Bayern, where also playing Thomas Müller and Jamal Musiala her favourite players.

But she also loves drawing what she is doing since the kindergarten. She likes to draw with the colours red and blue, because they are her favourite colours.

Sport and german are her favourite subjects in the school. But she doesn’t like english, except the topics about the american history. though she prefers english music more than german music. Her favourite ice cream is cinement and chocolate and her favourite food is sushi, which she could eat every day for lunch.

Von 1-10, wie gut ist er für einen Text aus der 8 Klasse? Danked🙏🙏

 

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Summary?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

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Englisch?

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob jemand wieder bitte über meinen Text drüber schauen könne. Wäre sehr lieb, danke!

,,I have been living in the US since Monday because I wanted to start a new life. I had really wanted to go to the US before I really arrived here. It‘s very fantastic here and the people are very friendly although I‘ve only been here for one week. When I arrived at the airport in Boston on the first day, I thought that I could never live in such a crowded and large nation. But then I met a woman and she cared for me. She has become my friend. She showed me the airport and different cities. At first, we went to California where I explored different cities, such as Los Angeles and San Francisco. I went to Disneyland there and it was so much fun. I also saw the Golden Gate Bridge with its fantastic view. I even saw real Native Americans on their reservations! They looked very friendly at me but I am also sorry for them that they have to live outside. I am very happy that I‘ve immigrated to the US. After exploring California, I went to New York where I have been living now since Wednesday. It‘s so cool here because when I came to New York, it was already late in the evening and because of the darkness, I went to Times Square since it is known for its bright lights. I went to a restaurant there where I ate the popular pizza slices and they tasted very delicious. After I had eaten, I was exploring Times Square while it was pretty dark and because of the bright lights of the advertisements, it was so gorgeous and I felt like it would be my home town so that I‘ve decided to stay here in New York forever. I live in an apartment in New York with my new friends as long as I don‘t have enough money to buy my own house. I work in the Empire State Building where I work as an official and I really like living here!“

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Englisch?

Könnte jemand mal über meinen Text vor allem wegen der Informationen und der Grammatik drüber schauen? Danke, wäre sehr lieb!

,,Lakota is a Native American tribe and they lived in America at first. Now they live in South and North Dakota. Lakota people are nomadic hunters and gatherers and they kill buffaloes to stay alive. The food is poor, so they need to kill buffaloes. They are strongly connected with the nature. They are a part of larger Sioux Nation which consists of Lakota, Dakota and Nakota. They wear headdresses with feathers and they have been a part of North American history for over 500 years. They have their own language and traditions such as Sun Dance. Sun Dance is a tradition that includes fasting, praying, and dancing to honor the sun. Another famous tradition is Vision Quest where people go on a journey in nature to seek personal revelation and spiritual growth. But they also have a strong tradition of storytelling, telling legends, and teaching from one generation to the next. Lakota is also very known for its history because in the 19th century, an argument between European settlers, the U.S. government and their tribe broke out and their tribe fought against them. Sitting Bull and Crazy Horse were the chiefs of their tribe and they protected them. They also fought against the U.S. government because they wanted to keep their land. They also did it but more arguments broke out after they had done it for the first time, so, after all, they lost their land nevertheless. Today they live on reservations.“

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wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Informationen zu ergänzen habt, dann gerne her damit! :)

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Englisch?

Hallo, ich wollte fragen, ob mal jemand über meinen Text drüber schauen könnte. Wäre echt sehr lieb, danke!

,,My parents come from Kazakhstan and my mother came to Germany when she was 12 years old. My father came to Germany when he was 15 years old. They were forced to leave their home country by their parents because they wanted to start a new life and they were only teenagers, so they weren‘t allowed to decide whether they would stay in Kazakhstan or go to Germany. I was born in Germany and I can‘t speak Russian. I really like Germany because of the people but if I had to leave Germany, I would definitely go to Spain since it is a very interesting, warm and gorgeous country. I can‘t stand cold days, so it would be a perfect country for me. There are several beaches and unique sights such as the castle in Madrid. But nevertheless, a war or bad government would have to happen so that I would leave Germany because then it would be really bad to live in Germany as you wouldn‘t be treated well. But if I really had enough money, I would try to immigrate to Spain. I would hope that the people would be friendly to me and understand that I wouldn‘t be able to speak their language at first but I even think that I wouldn‘t be able to speak Spanish fluently even if I learned it for several years because it is a difficult language. I would also hope that the life would be great there and I would make new friends. I think I would also have a lot of problems for example missing my family and my friends and I would have problems with speaking their language. I would be afraid of talking to them since perhaps they would make fun of me or would talk to me in an unfriendly way. It would be a complete change for me and I would have to get used to new habits for example going to another school. On the other hand, it would be great to experience new adventures and explore new locations. You could go to a beach every day! So, on the one hand, I would really like to go to Spain but on the other hand, I would be really afraid of leaving my home country because of the problems that could "destroy“ my life. I am not sure whether I stay here in Germany or go to an other country.“

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Englisch?

Hallo. Könnte mal eventuell jemand über meinen Text über die USA drüber schauen? Wäre echt lieb von euch, danke! Und wenn ihr noch irgendwelche Sachen zum Text ergänzen würdet (Themen, wie z.B. die Bevölkerung usw), dann gerne her damit!
,,The US are in North America. America is a Continental and it consists of South America, Central America and North America. The US are very popular since they created a lot of things like McDonald’s and so on. It is very cool there because of the many sights such as the Statue of Liberty which you can see in many pictures. You can see a lot of cool things of the US have become so popular. Today the population of the US are about 330 million. The capital is Washington, D.C and people come there from all over the world. People from Mexico, Central or South America are called Hispanics or Lations. Their first language is often Spanish, so the US don‘t have a national language since more than one third of the population speaks Spanish in some areas and that is why most of the signs are in Spanish and English. There are about 2,5 million Native Americans and most of them live on reservations. When white immigrants came to America in the 17th century, they fought against the Native Americans because they wanted to get their land and after they had won, most of Native Americans had to leave their land and they had to live on reservations. Today, they still live on reservations and they are very poor. They don‘t have any jobs, so they try to earn money by keeping traditions such as the powwow. It is a celebration of American Indian culture. They sing, feast and dance there. Native Americans such as the Cherokees are one of the most popular Indian tribes of the US and they live in the South of the US. Another popular tribe are the Navajos who live in the Southwestern of the US. In 1883 there were 4 million black Americans and they didn‘t have the same rights as white Americans, so people like Malcolm X fought for the rights of black people. Today about 40 million black Americans live in the US. As you can see, the US had a lot of problems in the past but it is still a very cool nation.“

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ich wäre euch echt dankbar!

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