Hallo, denkt ihr dieser Text reicht für ein 5 Minuten Referat zum Thema ´´Me and my Family´´?
Ich muss ein Referat über Mich und meine Familie halten das 5 Minuten gehen soll, bin mir aber nicht sicher ob das alles gut geschrieben, und richtig formuliert ist.
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Hello,
I would like to tell you something about me and my family. First of all, my name is --- and I was born in --- on the 28th february 2005, so I´m fourteen years old. I live with my Family in ---, which is a nice town in --- in the south of Germany. I currently visit the ninth class in the ---. I have a guineapig and a rabbit in my room, my guineapig is three and my rabbit is five years old. I also had fish, but unfortunately they died of water poisoning. We also have a dog named Chicco, who is twelve years old and a cat named Becki ,who is four years old.
My oldest brother is --- years old and his name is ---. He works at --- as a programmer, he is currently creating his own website. He also often works at home when, for example, he is not doing so well. His hobbies are meeting friends and creating games at home on the computer. He went go to high school, and successfully graduated with excellent grades. He also has a driver´s license and his own car, which he rents to come to ---.
My second oldest brother is --- years old and his name is ---, he is in the twelve grade at the high school in ---. His hobbies are table tennis and meeting with friends too. He often plays on the computer with his friends and goes to a club with them. His favorite game is ---. His favorite food are pancakes with applesauce. He also plans to get the driver´s license next year.
Lastly my sister, she is --- years old and his name are ---, she go in the fifth grade on the ---. She also have a guineapig, and her hobbies are horse riding and cycle. Her favorite games are --- and ---.
My grandmas living in Germany in --- and ---, They are both over eighty years old and are still very fit. My grandmas also have a large garden and lots of space. We always visit you on special occasions and celebrate together.
Last year we were on vacation in ---. We went hiking almost every day and also went to restaurants. There was often bad weather. During this time we were at home and playing games. The vacation was very nice and we saw great mountains from our house. On the home trip we saw the --- and the cable railway, this was very nice.
This was my presentation about me and my family
(Ein kleiner Teil fehlt wo ich über meine Eltern schreibe, sonst wäre der Text hier zu lang...)
Ich danke im Voraus für Tipps und Verbesserungen usw ;)
