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Hallo, kann mir jemand sagen ob das gut ist?

Wir mussten in Englisch eine Short Story schreiben und ich wollte wissen ob ihr mir Verbesserungsvorschläge oder so geben könntet?

On the same day at evening we and Frank's father packed our bags and went to the Jungle. We reached there at 8 pm. So Frank's father decided to make a camp for sleeping and on morning we will visit the whole Jungle. But we wanted to visit it at night so they decided that when Frank's father fall asleep we will go and come before when he awakens. Amongst them Noah was courageous and Sebastian was fearful, but Tim and me were not much scared. Frank was in front and rest of them were following him. Suddenly we hear some fearful voices. Sebastian got scared and said I am going back to camp. Then afterwards we heard also the bark of a dog. They were walking that suddenly on the left side Liam saw someone but only for seconds, he got scared and ran back to camp. After few minutes I said: "This is so fearful and I am scared of nights, let me go back to camp". Frank said: "Ok, but I will come after visiting whole Jungle"! Your wish, I said. After that in morning Frank's father asked where is Frank? We replied that at night we went to a Jungle tour but we got scared so we came back but Frank said I will come after visiting whole Jungle. Then we came back to camp. Frank's father first scold at us but after that, we went in search of Frank. We were walking that suddenly we saw a blood on the floor, we thought that it must be of Frank's! We were walking and walking in search, after an hour of walking we found the corpse of Frank!...

Englisch, Short story

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