englisch Präsentation me and my family kann jemand helfen?

die Präsentation muss 5 Minuten lang sein über mich und meine Familie auf englisch. Mir fällt irgendwie nicht so viel ein und weiß auch nicht ob die Grammatik ganz richtig ist. kann mir jemand helfen und eventuell manche dinge verbessern? :) ich hoffe es sieht jemand und mir hilft jemand! manche informationen habe ich weg gemacht ().
so viel habe ich bis jetzt:

Hello, I want to tell you about me and my family. My Name is  ** and i was born on the twelfh august two tousand and , so i am ** years old. I go to the ninth class in the ** school. My favourite food is pasta with tomato sauce. i don't eat meat since 6 years. i don't eat it because i like animals. My favouritehobby is . I play it since 3 month. Another Hobby i like is shopping, i love to buy new clothes. but i like it too, to do something with my friends. When i am older i want to have a good job and a nice family. but first i have to succeed my school graduation. Now i tell you something about my family. I have a Halfbrother of my dad. His Name is ** and he is fifteen years old. His Hobby is driving bike. He goes to a Gymnasium in . My Mother is going to be ** and works in a . my dad is ** and works in his own company. They were married 15 years long and they isolated themselves before 4 years. Now i live with my mum in a house in ** with .He is a coccer spaniel and is 12 years old. My dad have a dog too. His name is , he is a golden retriever and is 11 years old.

Englisch, Schule, Präsentation
One Minute Presentation?

Ist der Text Grammatik, und auf Englisch Richtig?

Today I Talk about New York and its sights. First, I'm Talking about The reason of The constructions, Themen with General Informations about The One World Trade Center. I will Themen Tell you why I chose The One World Trade Center. Enjoy The presentation.

The One World Trade Center was Built in Memory of 9/11, Since Then in 9/11 The Building complex, The World Trade Center was by terrorists destroyed has Been.

Today is on The Floor of The destroyed World Trade Center, The One World Trade Center. It has a height of 541. meters, and is tallest Building in The United Staates of Amerika. It has 104. floors, 73. elevators and 325.000. Square meters. The One World Trade Center was built and opened in New York in November, 2014.
By March 2009, The skyscrapper, The Freedom Tower was named. Today, The One World Trade Center in New York, Lower Manhattan District. There je stand das Protection against car bombs, 8. meters from The Road away. Today, The skycrapper is The centerpiece of The New York skyline, and is located on The Hudson River.

I have The One World Trade Center selected, behause I find his story, and The opperance very nice. Another reason is that I want to visit The skyscrapper in The future. Trank you for listening.
(Groß- und Kleinschreibung nicht beachten)
LG, Danke im Voraus.

Englisch, Schule, Präsentation, Referat, Grammatik, Inhalt, Kurzgeschichte, New York, Wolkenkratzer

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