Writing a Leaflet?

Hallo!

Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Folgende Punkte müssen beantwortet werden:

  • give information about the centre
  • discuss why being there is beneficial for the refugees
  • suggest events to bring the community closer together

 

Use your time! – Everybody is welcome! (Hauptüberschrift)
Have you ever thought about joining the local youth centre Yolo? Wouldn’t you like to make new friends and have fun while learning new skills? If yes, then we have an exciting opportunity for you.
 
What is the Yolo local youth centre?
Yolo is a place where young people come together to learn and build a sense of community. We provide various activities that can help you improve your German and social skills, as well as your computer skills. This can ultimately increase your chances of finding a job.
 
Why Yolo is the best!
Learning German is an essential skill for refugees and migrants living in Germany. Not only in your job, also when you ask for advice. Yolo provides a supportive environment for young refugees to learn and practice German, while also meeting and interacting with other young people in their community.
But guess what: That is not all. The world also gets more and more modern. You learn everything you need to know about computers nowadays at this centre.
 
Events to bring the community closer together!
At Yolo, we organize several social events every week to bring our community closer together. These events include cultural festivals, sports tournaments, and even swimming trips. One of our most popular events is the weekly football match on Saturdays. It's a great way to get active and have fun with other teenagers.
So what are you waiting for? Join us today by writing to youthcentreyolo@gmail.com .
And if you are feeling overwhelmed, do not hesitate to contact our support.
 
See you soon!
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Englisch Text korrigieren oder umschreiben?

Hallo liebe Community,

ich wollte euch fragen, ob ihr eventuell meinen Englisch Text korrigieren und wenn der Satz generell nicht stimmen sollte, umschreiben könnt? Ich habe versuch in ein leichtes Englisch zu schreiben, weil meine Lehrerin das auch besser bewertet also ein kompliziertes Englisch. Ich würde mich echt freuen wenn ihr mir helfen könnt! :)

Hi Leah,

I came across your blog post about your opinion about Shakespeare's poems. You claim that they are all boring and have strange illusions. Well, I really don't agree with you, but I want to introduce you one of my favourite poems by William Shakespear "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"

Let me summarize this masterpiece for you: The Sonnet starts with a flattering question "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?". William Shakespeare explains that his love is as beautiful as the most beautiful things in the world, such as a summer’s day. In the next line, he rejects this idea immediately. He says that the beauty of summer is fleeting and that it will eventually be replaced by the harshness of winter. However, the speaker also claims that the person’s beauty will be immortalized in the poem, since her beauty will supposedly never fade or die. This special thing about her is what gives her life and it’s a tribute to how couples see their partner as the only one for them.

In my opinion, it is a poem of admiration and adoration, almost certainly the best known piece of Shakespeare’s work. The simplicity and loveliness of this poem is outstanding and one of the main reasons for the poem’s success. The major themes in Sonnet 18 are the timelessness, nature, love, beauty and the death and immortality. I think the main theme is timeless and I specifically like it because it is a deeper theme of immortalization. Lack of time is a theme that has and will affect humans forever and therefore the wish for eternity reflects a universal experience.

Let me know what you think now about this poem. Don't worry, I am not mad if you still defend your opinion but let me know if you have changed your mind! :)

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Ist mein Host Family Letter gut so?

Ich würde gerne dieses Jahr ein Auslandsjahr machen und muss dafür einen Dear Family Letter schreiben. Ich bräuchte ein paar Tipps und Verbesserungsvorschläge (es hat nicht alles draufgepasst, im nächsten blockgeht es weiter):

Dear host family,

my name is XXX. Currently I am 15 years old and I´ll tourn 16 on May 21st. I live in a small village between Munich and Salzburg in Bavaria, Germany. At the moment I attend the 10th grade at a secondary school in XXX, which I will graduate in June. In this letter I´d like to tell you a bit about myself:

As I mentioned before I live in a small Village named XXX with approximately 4400 inhabitants. It is in the fore hills of the alps and I it only takes me ten minutes to the nearest mountain Hochfelln. There we go skiing in the winter or hiking, climbing or mountain biking in the summer.

We also live here near the largest lake of Bavaria named Chiemsee, which can be reached in about 15 minutes by bike from my hometown. There are also a lot of smaller lakes in the surrounding area.

XXX, where I visit school, is the closest town. It takes 15 minutes to get there by car. Munich, the capital city of Bavaria, is a one hour drive from XXX. You can get to Salzburg in about 30 minutes by train or car, across the border to Austria. Sometimes we visit theatre performances or concerts there.

I live here with my parents and Grandmother in a farm yard with horses on a little hill, where we have a beautiful view to XXX and the lake Chiemsee.

I also have an older brother named XXX, who is ten years older than me and is currently doing a trip around the world with his girlfriend XXX. Because of the age difference we weren’t verry close in the past, but since Corona we got to know each other better and he is now one of my dearest friends.

Furthermore I have a great relationship with my parents. We go on vacation together, do bike tours, go hiking, climbing or skiing. I know that I can always go to them with any trouble.

I really love my friends even if I don’t have a lot but I think quality is better than quantity. We love to explore nearby cities like Munich or Salzburg, where we can easily get by train. There we visit museums or simply go shopping.

In summer we go cycling or swimming in one of the lakes nearby. We sometimes have picnics with homemade snacks too. In winter we often go skiing or ice skating. ...

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