Ist diese englisch outline gut?

hallo wollte fragen ob diese outline gut ist.

The excerpt of an article "I Know What You Did Last Math Class," written by Jan Hoffman and published in "The New York Times" on 4. May 2008, Deals with school programs for parents to check their children's grades and behavior. In the following paragraphs, we will outline the information related to the benefits of these programs, as presented in the text.

The main body of the text highlights that many parents utilize these programs to exert greater control over their children's lives, especially during a phase when teenagers seek more independence. Parents argue that the intensely competitive college admissions process compels them to frequently check their children's online grades. Interestingly, many parents who engage in regular online grade checks fondly reminisce about their own adolescence, where deception was common. The advent of programs like Edline eliminates the covert satisfaction associated with such deception. Nevertheless, parents like Mrs. Tarantino, a supporter of Power School, contend that the stakes have drastically changed, citing today's all-encompassing academic pressure compared to previous generations.

Quantifying the precise impact of these programs on academic performance proves challenging due to numerous variables. However, principals anecdotal report that these programs have succeeded in motivating parents and students who were previously challenging to engage. They have notably assisted middle school boys in improving their organizational skills.

According to Ron Jones, the principal of Huth Middle School, situated in Matteson, IIlinois, a middle-class suburb of Chicago with a 90-percent minority student population, "Edline opens up communication between parents and teachers. It helps keep the children focused on their academics." These software solutions also prove beneficial for working parents, allowing divorced parents to access information without the need for direct contact.

In Noblesville, Indiana, after a survey indicated that parents felt adequately informed through PowerSchool and subsequent email exchanges with teachers, the middle-school principal decided to forego parent-teacher conferences and allocate the time back to classroom instruction.

In conclusion, these programs have both advantages and disadvantages. They enhance communication between parents and teachers, motivate parents and students, and cater to the needs of working parents. However, accurately quantifying their impact on academic performance remains challenging, and concerns regarding student privacy persist.

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Englisch Argumentative Essay?

Wie findet ihr diesen Argumentative Essay, ich hab heute die Klassenarbeit zurückbekommen und hab eine 4 bekommen. (9.Klasse)

Die Aufgabe war folgende: Schreibe einen Argumentative Essay über das Thema: "Doing an exchange year in Australia is a great idea". Wir mussten mindestens 3 Argumente dafür, und 3 dagegen finden.

Australia, the continent where the most dangerous animals are living, is very interesting for students who want to do an exchange year in a country where people speak English. The following essay will show argument sfor, and against doing an exchange year in Australia.

At the beginning, we will look at the arguments against the exchange year.

First, in Australia there are lots of dangerous animals, for example snakes, spiders, and others, they can kill you with just a bite, and it could be hard to get the medicin for that.

Furthermore, you could argue you cant visit your family very often, the distance between Australia and Germany is really big, and the tickets for planes are really expensive.

The last argument against the exchange year, is that it might be hard for you to understand the Australian people talking, because of their hard accent.

Lets move on to the arguments for doing an exchange year in Australia.

Firstly, Australia offers a lot when it comes to nature, on the one day you could see a shark swimming in the sea, and on the other, you could be in the desert.

Another argument for doing the exchange year is, that you can learn a lot about other cultures, for example the Aboriginals. You could learn how they lived in the Outback, or about the stolen generations.

Last but not least, you could argue that you would learn the language, if you are doing an exchange year in Australia, because you would speak English all day long.

In my opinion, an exchange year to Australia is a great way to learn English, and a lot about the aboriginals and how the lived there

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English?

Wir sollten einen Text über "Does money make happy?" schreiben. Passt das dann so?:

Happiness. Is there anything we are striving for more? Some people might say they are seeking money, their dream job, or maybe the love of their life. But all these goals are lifting up the parallel between work and happiness. These goals are about making you happy. But this brings us to our main question: Do we really have to work hard and sweaty to end up content and happy? The easiest way to come up with an answer is looking at the correlation of a job's earning and the feeling of happiness. Evidently, not every wealthy person died happy or content. There are thousands of billionaires not being thrilled about their great richness. They did work hard for their money, but this isn't making them feel okay. Looking at the opposite, we see poor people left with nothing leading a quite fulfilling life. They had enough time to ponder essential aspects of life and to conclude that life isn't about the biggest cars, houses, or private jets. And I am convinced that this work of thinking and absolutely correct conclusion takes a lot more effort than some moneybags made. The material the world is holding up for you if you work hard doesn't make you happy in any kind. A clear sentiment focusing on important things such as maintaining a loyal relationship with friends and family or growing up mentally results in a great life. Material is temporary, but what remains are your positive thoughts and ideas you share with people you love and your attemptment to become the best version of yourself. Dreams should follow you and not the other way around.

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Gibt es Muttersprachler oder Personen mit perfekten Englischkenntnissen, die mir möglicherweise bei der Korrektur einer Übersetzung helfen könnten?
Hallo Community, Mitglieder, Muttersprachler oder Personen mit perfekten Englischkenntnissen, vielleicht könnt ihr bei der Korrektur einer Übersetzung für ein Freund helfen,er lernt gerade dazu :) ob wir es richtig übersetzt haben, wäre euch sehr dankbar?

1.

  • Mach's dir bequem
  • Steigert den Komfort im Handumdrehen

Make yourself comfortable

Increases comfort in the blink of an eye

2.

  • Entlastet das Steißbein durch U-förmige Aussparung
  • Lindert Rückenschmerzen
  • dank wärmeresponsivem Memory-Foam

Relieves pressure on the coccyx due to U-shaped recess

Alleviates back pain

thanks to warmer-responsive memory foam

3.

Wie für dich gemacht

Passt sich perfekt an deinen Körper an

As if made for you

Fits perfectly to your body

4.

  • Aufrechte Sitzhaltung dank ergonomischem
  • Design
  • Verbesserte Durchblutung durch gleichmäßige Gewichtsverteilung
  • Angenehmeres Sitzgefühl durch verringerten Druck in strategischen Bereichen

Upright sitting posture thanks to ergonomic

design

Improved blood circulation due to even weight distribution

More comfortable sitting due to reduced pressure in strategic areas

5.

  • Die ideale Entlasstung In deinem Alltag
  • Lindert Steißbeinbeschwerden durch U-Form
  • The ideal relief in your everyday life
  • Relieves coccyx discomfort due to U-shape

6.

Auf dich zugeschnitten

In 3 Härtegraden erhältlich

Tailored to you

Available in 3 degrees of hardness

7.

  • BEI DER ARBEIT
  • UNTERWEGS
  • BEIM LERNEN
  • FÜR DEN TOP WOHLFÜHLFAKTOR IMMER & ÜBERALL

AT WORK

ON THE MOVE

WHILE LEARNING

FOR THE TOP FEEL-GOOD FACTOR ALWAYS & EVERYWHERE

8.

  • RÜCKEN
  • UNTERSTÜTZT DICH DA, WO DU ES BRAUCHST
  • HÜFTE & STEISSBEIN
  • DANK ENTLASTENDER U-FORM

BACK

SUPPORTS YOU WHERE YOU NEED IT

HIP & COCCYX THANKS RELIEVING

U-SHAPE

9.

  • VORTEILE
  • VERTEILT DEIN KÖRPERGEWICHT GLEICHMÄSSIG
  • HILFT DIR AUFRECHT ZU SITZEN - STUNDENLANG
  • ENTLASTET DEIN STEISSBEIN & RÜCKEN
  • WASCHBARER BEZUG

ADVANTAGES

DISTRIBUTES YOUR BODY WEIGHT EVENLY

HELPS YOU SIT UPRIGHT - FOR HOURS

RELIEVES YOUR COCCYX & BACK

WASHABLE COVER

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Hallo Community, gibt’s hier Muttersprachler oder die perfekt englisch können und meine Übersetzung vielleicht korrigieren könnten oder passt das,lieben Dank?

    Mach's dir bequem

    Steigert den Komfort im Handumdrehen

    Make yourself comfortable

    Increases comfort in the blink of an eye

    2.

    • Entlastet das Steißbein durch U-förmige Aussparung
    • Lindert Rückenschmerzen
    • dank wärmeresponsivem Memory-Foam

    Relieves pressure on the coccyx due to U-shaped recess

    Alleviates back pain

    thanks to warmer-responsive memory foam

    3.

    Wie für dich gemacht

    Passt sich perfekt an deinen Körper an

    As if made for you

    Fits perfectly to your body

    4.

    Aufrechte Sitzhaltung dank ergonomischem

    Design

    Verbesserte Durchblutung durch gleichmäßige Gewichtsverteilung

    Angenehmeres Sitzgefühl durch verringerten Druck in strategischen Bereichen

    Upright sitting posture thanks to ergonomic

    design

    Improved blood circulation due to even weight distribution

    More comfortable sitting due to reduced pressure in strategic areas

    5.

    Die ideale Entlasstung In deinem Alltag

    Lindert Steißbeinbeschwerden durch U-Form

    The ideal relief in your everyday life

    Relieves coccyx discomfort due to U-shape

    6.

    Auf dich zugeschnitten

    In 3 Härtegraden erhältlich

    Tailored to you

    Available in 3 degrees of hardness

    7.

    BEI DER ARBEIT

    UNTERWEGS

    BEIM LERNEN

    FÜR DEN TOP WOHLFÜHLFAKTOR IMMER & ÜBERALL

    AT WORK

    ON THE MOVE

    WHILE LEARNING

    FOR THE TOP FEEL-GOOD FACTOR ALWAYS & EVERYWHERE

    8.

    RÜCKEN

    UNTERSTÜTZT DICH DA, WO DU ES BRAUCHST

    HÜFTE & STEISSBEIN

    DANK ENTLASTENDER U-FORM

    BACK

    SUPPORTS YOU WHERE YOU NEED IT

    HIP & COCCYX THANKS RELIEVING

    U-SHAPE

    9.

    VORTEILE

    VERTEILT DEIN KÖRPERGEWICHT GLEICHMÄSSIG

    HILFT DIR AUFRECHT ZU SITZEN - STUNDENLANG

    ENTLASTET DEIN STEISSBEIN & RÜCKEN

    WASCHBARER BEZUG

    ADVANTAGES

    DISTRIBUTES YOUR BODY WEIGHT EVENLY

    HELPS YOU SIT UPRIGHT - FOR HOURS

    RELIEVES YOUR COCCYX & BACK

    WASHABLE COVER

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    Englisch?

    Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

    Hello Stefan,

    since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

    As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

    Take care!

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    Text in Englisch mit Thema healthy life?

    Hello people! Here is Leo and I'm 16 years old. Today's topic is my healthy life. First of all 1 my food habits I do to stay healthy will say something about and then I tell you my daily activities. My day every beginn with a large glass of water. Then I fast prepare my breakfast. I mostly eat at break- eggs, bread with cream cheese and vegetables like tomatos or Cucumber. and at dinner I At lunch 1 often eat eat for salad or example pasta whole grain per bread. For me it is very important that I eat day at least one band fruits and vegetables. This food include many vitamins and minerals, which are important for our health. Furthermore I make Sure that I eat enough protein, because I do weight training. And last but not least you should drink between 2-3 liter water and less soft drinks, because they have a lot of sugar and calories.. Another important aspect for a healthy lifestyle are daily activities. So I do every day 10.000 sleps and that should you do too. On the top of that I go three days a Heek to a and there I do sport. At the beginning gym a warm up, then I do Height training for at least one hours and finally 30 minutes cardio training. That are my sport routine. What do you do for sport ? I would be happy if you share an another entry with your healthy life tips. Now I wish all readers a sporty and healthy day and don't forget your restday.
    Bye Leo

    In Ordnung für 10. Klasse und bitte berichtigen bei Fehlern nur so kann ich daraus lernen.

    Oben verschrieben erste und zweite Satz!

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    Englisch Arbeit Text über Globale Erwärmung?

    Hallo

    ich Bin in der 9. klasse und gehe auf eine real Schule

    ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Arbeit, und muss wahrscheinlich auch ein Text über globale Erwärmung schreiben

    wie ist dieser Text?

    Was würdet ihr ändern? Ist er in Ordnung?

    ,,Global warming is the average temperature increasing all over the world over an extended period of time. But it doesn't mean it's happening equally all over the world.

    The burning of fossil fuels, deforestation and animal husbandry are increasingly affecting the Earth's climate and temperature.

    The amount of naturally occurring greenhouse gases in the atmosphere increases enormously, which intensifies the greenhouse effect and global warming.

    You can also do something about global warming if you use bicycles and public transport instead of driving your own car or if you can choose to use electric cars because they have a better climate footprint.

    You can also pay attention to which country your fruit and vegetables come from next time you go to the supermarket. It is best to try to buy fruit or vegetables that are locally sourced, as this way you can reduce the distance that the food needs to get to you.

    Polar bears are also dying due to global warming as they have less and less habitat because the ice is melting.

    Glaciers have been melting for more than 20 years. In addition, sea levels are rising, resulting in flooding.

    In countries where it is very hot, forest fires occur, such as in Turkey.

    Because of climate change, around 40% of all insects may become extinct.“

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    Englisch Artikel bitte korrigieren oder umschreiben?

    Hallo Leute, könnt ihr eventuell diesen Artikel lesen und wenn da Fehler sind, es zu korrigieren oder umzuschreiben? Wäre super nett von euch, meine Hausübung wird nämlich benotet und schreibt noch euren Feedback rein, ich danke euch :)

    Los Angeles has seen the evil

    A recent school shooting in Los Angeles has brought the issue of school safety in the bad light. So, people became aware of these happening. On 30th April 2023, two 17-year-old students have armed their high school with two guns which left 11 people dead and 5 injured. This incident has left people worried about the safety of students and staff at schools.

    Gun violence, especially in schools, is still a national crisis in the United States and migrants are still allowed to carry a gun because of the “national firearms agreement”. Due to the licenses of weapons, such acts are occurring more and more frequently. In order to protect students and school staff, most schools have security guards. There are also usually controls at the entrances. As a way to prevent non-schoolers from entering the school, they have their own school cards, which clearly show the identifies of the students. In addition, the police have increased their presence at schools.

    Students, who have witnessed such incident, are usually traumatised and can hardly cope without psychological help. Many students and parents report terrible feelings and perceptions. “I was so scared when I heard gunshots. I ran and hid under a desk until the police came. Now I’m afraid to come back to school,” says a victim who survived this cruelty. Parents were calling desperately for their children, they even got more scared when they didn’t respond. These are just a few. As a result, the police has to deal with such incidents more and more often. “It is nothing scary anymore, we are already used to it”, claims a policeman. “We are already best prepared for such acts”, adds another officer. They have certain educations and trainings for these hardships.

    Due to the school shooting on April 30th, this issue is more present than ever. Many students and parents are extremely frightened that they can also be victims. This clearly shows that much more could be done preventively.

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    Writing a Leaflet?

    Hallo!

    Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Folgende Punkte müssen beantwortet werden:

    • give information about the centre
    • discuss why being there is beneficial for the refugees
    • suggest events to bring the community closer together

     

    Use your time! – Everybody is welcome! (Hauptüberschrift)
    Have you ever thought about joining the local youth centre Yolo? Wouldn’t you like to make new friends and have fun while learning new skills? If yes, then we have an exciting opportunity for you.
     
    What is the Yolo local youth centre?
    Yolo is a place where young people come together to learn and build a sense of community. We provide various activities that can help you improve your German and social skills, as well as your computer skills. This can ultimately increase your chances of finding a job.
     
    Why Yolo is the best!
    Learning German is an essential skill for refugees and migrants living in Germany. Not only in your job, also when you ask for advice. Yolo provides a supportive environment for young refugees to learn and practice German, while also meeting and interacting with other young people in their community.
    But guess what: That is not all. The world also gets more and more modern. You learn everything you need to know about computers nowadays at this centre.
     
    Events to bring the community closer together!
    At Yolo, we organize several social events every week to bring our community closer together. These events include cultural festivals, sports tournaments, and even swimming trips. One of our most popular events is the weekly football match on Saturdays. It's a great way to get active and have fun with other teenagers.
    So what are you waiting for? Join us today by writing to youthcentreyolo@gmail.com .
    And if you are feeling overwhelmed, do not hesitate to contact our support.
     
    See you soon!
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    Englisch Text korrigieren oder umschreiben?

    Hallo liebe Community,

    ich wollte euch fragen, ob ihr eventuell meinen Englisch Text korrigieren und wenn der Satz generell nicht stimmen sollte, umschreiben könnt? Ich habe versuch in ein leichtes Englisch zu schreiben, weil meine Lehrerin das auch besser bewertet also ein kompliziertes Englisch. Ich würde mich echt freuen wenn ihr mir helfen könnt! :)

    Hi Leah,

    I came across your blog post about your opinion about Shakespeare's poems. You claim that they are all boring and have strange illusions. Well, I really don't agree with you, but I want to introduce you one of my favourite poems by William Shakespear "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"

    Let me summarize this masterpiece for you: The Sonnet starts with a flattering question "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?". William Shakespeare explains that his love is as beautiful as the most beautiful things in the world, such as a summer’s day. In the next line, he rejects this idea immediately. He says that the beauty of summer is fleeting and that it will eventually be replaced by the harshness of winter. However, the speaker also claims that the person’s beauty will be immortalized in the poem, since her beauty will supposedly never fade or die. This special thing about her is what gives her life and it’s a tribute to how couples see their partner as the only one for them.

    In my opinion, it is a poem of admiration and adoration, almost certainly the best known piece of Shakespeare’s work. The simplicity and loveliness of this poem is outstanding and one of the main reasons for the poem’s success. The major themes in Sonnet 18 are the timelessness, nature, love, beauty and the death and immortality. I think the main theme is timeless and I specifically like it because it is a deeper theme of immortalization. Lack of time is a theme that has and will affect humans forever and therefore the wish for eternity reflects a universal experience.

    Let me know what you think now about this poem. Don't worry, I am not mad if you still defend your opinion but let me know if you have changed your mind! :)

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    Englisch-Block Entry?

    Hallo!

    Wie findet ihr diesen Block Entry? Ich musste diese Bullet Points einbinden:

    • Die Wichtigkeit des Themas erklären.
    • Die negativen Dinge über Autofahren.
    • Die positiven Dinge über Fahrradfahren, Öffentliche Transportmittel, Zufußgehen.

    Have you ever considered what you can do to effectively protect the environment? Every individual can take steps to reduce their carbon emissions on a daily basis.

     

    As a
    student, I learn about climate change every day at school, and it's evident
    that our planet is at risk. While some people may feel powerless to make a
    difference, everyone can do their part. Personally, I start my day by using
    public transportation instead of driving to school.
     
    Do not get
    me wrong, I understand that many people prefer driving for its comfort and
    convenience. However, it's important to remember the environmental impact of
    burning fossil fuels and emitting car exhaust. In addition, opting for a bike
    or bus ticket can be much more cheaper than owning and driving a car. Furthermore,
    driving a car is not only harmful to the environment but also to our physical
    health due to the negative effects of inhaling car exhaust.
     
    Considering
    the fact that there are alternatives, such as cycling, public
    transportation, or walking, it simply doesn't make sense to rely on cars as our
    primary means of transportation. On the one hand all of these alternatives are
    better for the environment. On the other hand, there are much more positive
    aspects about them. When you use public transport, you can talk to other
    people. When cycling, you can see much more of the surroundings. Personally, I
    find walking to be the most relaxing and enjoyable way to travel.
     
    What's
    your opinion on this issue, and how do you usually travel?
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    Blog comment korrigieren: bitte helft mir, die hausübung wird sogar benotet?

    Hallo, das war die Angabe (Nummer 11):

    Könnt ihr bitte meinen Blog comment korrigieren, umschreiben, alles was geht, damit es ein guter text wird? ich würde mich echt freuen, es wird sogar benotet, bitte hilft mir dabei:

    Hi Artsy Tiger,

    there is a difference between spray painting and vandalism. If your friend use to paint an wall, which is not someone’s property, then it is not viewed as vandalism. However, if he painted for example a school or a market wall, can be considered as a crime and it may also carry consequences because of damaging the property belonging to others without permission. It is important to respect other people’s property and seek permission before making any changes on it, like spray painting. 

    So, as already mentioned and also according to the law, spray painters painting on public property without permission is considered illegal and can result in serious consequences for the artist. I guess, your friend was not properly informed about this and didn’t do it on purpose, maybe for fun. I mean, spray painting is also a form of art, just not the typical type of art. I can imagine that they are doing it from their heart, let their voices hear and from the experience of something that really impacts them like your friend, who painted his “world” on the wall.

    By the way, there are many crimes in general considered worse than spray painting, such as violent offenses like assault or murder, which can cause physical harm or death to others.

    I don’t know if it was fair though but I hope that your friend gets released as soon as possible!

    Bild zum Beitrag
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    Englisch Essay: Kann jemand bitte darüber schauen, würde mich sehr freuen?

    Essay: Pet and Teenagers

    Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

    Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

    Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

    As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

    Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

    To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

     

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    Würdet ihr für mein comment eine eins geben?

    Ich bin mir halt nicht sicher, ob mein comment in Fach Englisch mir gelungen ist, daher wäre ein Feedback nett :)

    Many people argue whether or not the British monarchy should be abolished.

    In the following, I present arguments for and against a monarchy so that you can form your own pinion.

    On the one hand, the British monarchy should be abolished because a monarch only rules but has no real political power or function. this means that a queen or king is unnecessary and unimportant to the state.

    Also, the UK is not a democracy, as is claimed, because in a democracy people can elect the head of state, but since the royal family is still alive, they will continue to be the head of state.

    This is very unfair and unequal to the rest of the population.

    Also, people can never be 100% sure if the next monarch is good for the state and does not have bad intentions.

    This could make people very worried.

    Another important aspect is that the royal family spends a lot of money on the palace when they could use the money for more important things.

    On the other hand, the British monarchy should not be abolished, because a monarch is very important even if he or she has no real political power.  

    His or her importance is reflected in national stability.

    Since a monarch embodies the British history, values and tradition, this leads to stronger national identification, which brings people closer together so that there is national stability.

    In addition, members of the royal family are very important to charities, because since the royal family has a good image and is important, charities can be heard better, so they continue with their charities.

    Some people may think that a monarch spends a lot of money, but that doesn't mean a president doesn't.

    there are many presidents with many

    There are also many presidents with many offices, even more than the British monarch.

    The fact that the royal family has always been at the head of the state means that people trust it because they know its good intentions.

    This means that the monarchy is in safe hands, so to speak.

    Another important point is that the royal family has shown that it can modernize and adapt to the times.  

    This is very important because many people claim that they are unmodern and have different thoughts than today.

    But the Queen, for example, has allowed her son Charles to marry a divorced woman, whereas in the past this was a very dangerous issue. 

    that means she was able to “modernise”. 

    Weighing the pros and cons of the British monarchy, one can say that it should not be abolished because the British monarchy has been very successful, mainly because it has adapted to the times and modernized.

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    Should the British monarchy be abolished? 

    Lots of people argue about whether the British monarchy should be abolished or not since the Queen recently died. 

    Therefore, I will list arguments for and against the monarch so that you can form your own opinion. 

    On one hand, a monarch is seen as a representative of the country.

    That is, he or she embodies traditional national values, unity and history.

    This leads to stronger national identification and brings people closer together. 

    That is why many people say that a monarchy brings stability.

    In addition, members of the royal family have important roles at the head of all kinds of charities, and because of their image and popularity, they help charities continue their good work. 

    Another positive aspect is that the British monarchy has shown that it is able to reform and adapt to modern times. An example of this would be that Prince Charles was allowed to marry a divorced women. 

    It can also be said that the queen or king is perhaps the most expensive monarch in Europe, but that does not mean that a president would be cheaper.

    On the other hand, the monarch has no real political power, which means that his or her functions are mainly formal and could easily be taken away by other political bodies or an elected president. 

    Although many members of the Royal Family head charities they do not really engage in political work for those charities but rather serve as a kind of figurehead. 

    But it is precisely a monarchy that harms democracy, because the people cannot elect the head of state. 

    Also, a monarch has no consequences to face when making mistakes and since Britain is a hereditary monarchy, nobody knows whether the next monarch will have good or bad intentions. 

    Therefore, it can be said that the royal family is a symbol of an unjust and unequal society. 

     

    Weighing the pros and cons one come to the conclusion that the monarchy has many positive sides, for example, it brings stability or embodies history, but the negative sides mask this.

    because since the country is a democracy, the monarchy should be abolished so that people can choose for themselves who should be the next monarch so that there is equality. 

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