Ich übe gerade für eine Englisch Klausur und bearbeite den Text: Do Food Miles Matter? Von Erika Engelhaupt.

Ich habe einen Einleitungssatz für Aufgabe 1 (Inhaltsangabe) geschrieben und würde gerne wissen, ob dieser richtig ist (grammatikalisch und inhaltlich).

Gibt es sogar vielleicht eine Summary im Internet? Ich kann nämlich keine finden.

Mein englisch leherer hat mir zwar erklärt wie man den anfang und den hauppteil schreibt aber er hat mir nie erklärt wie man das ende shchreibt

Hallo, heute habe ich Abitur geschrieben und war plötzlich verwirrt, in welcher Zeitform ich eine Summary schreibe (normal ja immer im simple present). jedoch bekam ich einen Text, in dem der Autor zuerst im Simple Past historische Ereignisse aufzählt und dann zum simple present wechselt, um die jetzige Situation zu beschreiben.

Text ( http://www.thestar.com/opinion/editorialopinion/2010/11/07/persichilli_the_failed_promise_of_multiculturalism.html )

Ich habe auch anfangs Simple Past genutzt, um die vergangenen Ereignisse zusammenzufassen und bin dann, als der Autor auch ins Päsens wechselt, zu simple present gewechselt. Meine Frage nun: Ist dies möglich? oder durften die historischen Ereignisse nur im simple present wiedergegeben werden?

Hallo,

habt ihr vielleicht eine Zusammenfassung in englisch von jeden Kapiteln? oder eine Seite wo das auch steht?

Danke

Wir müssen zu morgen aus dem Buch English G21, eine Summary zu der Geschichte "How to be a millionaire" schreiben. Hat es jemand schon gemachtoder kann mir jemand helfen? Bitte eine schnelle Antwort.

Hallo zusammen,

ich muss bis morgen eine Zusammenfassung der shortstory verfasst haben. Dies habe ich auch natürlich auch gemacht. nur leider weiss ich nicht ganz ob das soweit richtig ist. Vielleicht könnte jemand mir eine Zusammenfassung der Kurzgeschichte schreiben dann könnte ich das mit meiner vergleichen. Das wäre wirklich nett. Ich bedanke mich schon mal im voraus.

**The Text “The Stolen Generation“ written by Barbara McMahon, Guardian News and Media 2008, is about the stolen Generation from the Aboriginal and the Government who wanted delete the thousands of mixed-race children’s. Zita Wallace told a sad story about her Situation of the “Stolen generation”. As she was a little Girl in Australia, one day the nuns came to her house and took her out. They Said they want to go shopping with her, but they put her and a lots of children in the back of a truck and drove away.

Zita cried a lot, she recount The government wanted to forget the traditions of the Aboriginal, so they stolen children to mix them up with white people, making sure the Aboriginal to delete. The stealing of children ended after 60 years in 1970. Now the affected people and families want a apologize from the government. Finally Australia is saying sorry for all.******

danke für alle Verbesserung Vorschläge ;)

Hallo

Ist diese Summary gut?

The Pressure Cooker

The content of the second szene from the drama "The Pressure cooker" by Steve Skidmore and Steve Barlow is an quarrel between Andrea an her mother.

First Andreas mother is getting ready to go out when Andrea enters the kitchen. Andrea is surprised at seeing her mother still in. Her mother is angry, because Andrea came late and does no housework. Furthermore she ask Andrea about her exam for which Andrea learned very hard. As she hears that her daughter has bad results, she is even angry. She tells Andreas that her son Ian have always better results. Andrea would like to go to a drama collage, but her mother is in the opinion that a university is better for her.

Her mother would not discuess about it and tells her to stop seein Graham.

Hallo Leute, ich schreibe morgen ne Englisch Klausur über eine Rede. Ich bin grad voll verwirrt und weiß nicht genau wie ich die Einleitung des Summarys schreiben soll.

Also so in etwa:

Die vorliegende Rede "..." , gehalten von "..." im Jahre xxxx, thematisiert

oder

In der Rede "..." von "..." aus demJahre xxxx geht es um ....

Ich brauche einfach nen guten Satz :)

Danke für eure Hilfe!

Hallo Com. Ich schreibe in 2 Tagen eine Klausur in Englisch, in der wir eine Summary schreiben müssen. Meine Frage ist nun: Gibt es bei einer Summary einen Schluss ? Wenn ja, was kommt darin vor ?

Hey Leute ich hab da mal ne frage ich schreibe morgen eine englisch Klausur ( 10 Klasse ) und soll eine summary und Analyse schreiben . Im Unterricht hab ich ganix verstanden und jetzt ist meine Frage 1, was ich in den Hauptteil einer summary schreiben muss , ( Einleitungssatz versteh ich ) 2. wie ich eine gute Analyse schreibe

Danke schonmal im vorraus

euer SchmockBoB

Any mistakes? Any Verbesserungsvorschläge? P.s. Ist der Text nicht zu lang für eine Summary? Der orginal Text hat ca. 1042 Wörter.

The short story ‘The fun they had‘, written by Isaac Asimov deals with a boy and a girl, Tommy and Margie, who find out something about school in the past. On the 17th of March 2155 Tommy, a thirteen-year-old boy, finds a ‘real book‘ which has been printed on paper. He is at the house of Margie, an eleven-year-old girl. They both take a look at it togehter. The book is really old and the pages are yellow and crinky. In the year 2155 this kind of books do not exist anymore. In this time words are moving on a television screen. These televisions can contain over a million of boks. That is the reason, why Tommy thinks that they are much better. He has found the old book in the attic of his house. While reading, Tommy says that it is about school. Margie hates school and cannot understand why someone would write about it. She was having problems with learning geography from her ‘mechanical teacher‘. It was black, large and had a screen on it. It teaches the students, gives them exercises and askes them questions, all in a special room in their own house. It can also calculate the marks in no time. Margie hates the slot where she has to insert her homework or test papers. Once the geopraphy sector of her mechanical teacher was geraded too quick, so that her marks got worse and worse. The County Inspector rebuilt it after one hour. He was really nice to Margie. She hopped that her mechanical teacher would be taken away for a longer time, like Tommy’s was, because it’s history sector blanked out completly. Tommy says that the book which he has found, is not about their type of school, it is about school centuires ago. They find out that students back then had a man as a teacher who taught the girls and boys, gave them homework and asked them questions. They had a special building, all the children went to. And they learned the same things, if they were the same age. First Margie does not understand how a person could be a teacher and how the students were thaught the same thing, because her mother says that the education must fit to each child's mind, but nevertheless in her opinion these schools are funny and she wants to read more about it. Then it is time for Margie and Tommy for their school. Margie goes into the schoolroom in her house where the mechanical teacher stands. It is already on, because the lessons are always at regular hours. She was thinking about the old school system and how much fun the children must had, learning and spending time togehter.

Danke!

Grüßle! ~ ♫

alsoo..ich habe hier ein summary geschrieben zu einem kleinen textausschnitt des buches slam (zu finden im green line 6). da mein englisch (wie manche vllt schon in meiner frage von gestern gelesen haben) nicht das beste ist, würde ich gerne mal über mein summary drüberlesen lassen, ob grammatikalisch alles stimmt und ob es vllt noch ein paar verbesserungsvorschläge für die formulierung gibt:)

The extract from „Slam“ by Nick Hornby is about teenage pregnancy and shows us a 16-year-old boy who is scared of becoming a father. The action takes place at the time of the narrator’s 16th birthday. His name is Sam. In the morning he gets some cards, presents and doughnuts which his mum bought him before and he already plans his birthday-afternoon and –evening. After the breakfast Sam gets a message from Alicia. She writes that she has to see him very urgent. Locked in the bathroom, Sam answers her and gets nervous. Some time ago he and Alicia petted and he didn’t prevent. Now he’s scared that her urgent message could be that she’s pregnant. He has already that strange feeling in his guts. He writes her that he has no time, but she answers that he has to come. So they arrange a meeting at the Starbucks at 11 am. Sam gets very nervous and wants to sit on his mother’s lap, like a child. And he also wishes he would still be one and not to have such problems. He is also scared, that his mother wouldn’t love him anymore if she knew what he did. While going to the coffee shop he tries to deal with god. He wants Alicia not to be pregnant and promises God that he will neither skate, nor go to McDonald’s, nor watch TV anymore. He also thinks that he won’t ever have sex after this experience. At the Starbucks he buys a drink, trying to lengthen the time he doesn’t know the result yet. Suddenly he sits next to Alicia with his Frappuccino. She wishes him a happy birthday and tells him that her period is late.

Irgendwie krieg ich's nicht hin...Was kann ich noch verbessern oder anders fromulieren?

The stot sory 'The Big Race', written by Toby Sweet deals with a swimmer in a moral dilemma. It is the day for the narrator's swimming competition. His competitor, Gordon Hayes sits in the corner of the chancing room, talking to his father, while the boy watches them. Gordon's father tells his son that, if he does not win the race, he will hit him. The narrator talkes to his opponent and encorages him to make him feel better by saying that his father will not do something like that, but Gordon is confident that he will. While the main character practises for the approaching competiton with the club coach, he can not forget what the father of Gordon Hay wants to do. Later when he sits in his tracksuit, waiting for the race to begin, he tires to make himeself feel as comfortable as possible. When the swimming competition is just about to start the narrator does some loosing exercise for preperation and tries to plan his strategy, but the only thing he can concentrate on is his opponent, he feels sorry for. During the race it becomes clear, that the boy could win against Gordon, because he is half of a body ahead. But he decides to let him win to protect him from the punishment, so he slowes down when he sees the father shouting ans raising his fist. Sortly after the race the officials present the boys with their medals. At first the narrator regrets that that he let his competitor win, but when he sees the smile of the father, he thinks that it was worth it. When Gordon walkes away from the podium he behaves impolite and calles the main character pathetic and says that the boy will never win against him again, like he did before this race.

Hallo, Hat jmd eine gute summary über melba story auf englisch ? brauche sie bis morgen... Danke im vorraus :) Jacqueline

Ich schreibe morgen eine Klausur und wir bekommen einen Zeitungsartikel zu dem wir eine Summary schreiben müssen und ich bin mir bei etwas noch noicht so sicher. angenommen der autor schreibt über "immigration" und stellt das Problem mit Argumenten und so dar ... wie soll ich die dann zusammenfassen? Muss ich dann sowas schreiben wie 1) " In the auther´s opinion ...." ODER muss ich das einfach ganz normal zusammenfassen zb 2) "english should be compulsory for all", "and therse is a wider problem about the confused signals the Britains are sending"

also muss ich wie bei 1) immer schreiben dass es wirklich nur so von dem Auto gesehen wird oder einfach ganz normal zusammenfassen?

danke :)

Wie benutze ich Repoorted Speech bei einer Summary (Zusammenfassung), wenn ich mitteilen will, was der Autor erzählt? Muss ich Backshift of Tenses machen oder nicht und welche Zeit benutze ich ?

Ich bin in der 9. Klasse und wir schreiben bald eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch Thema Summary. Kennt ihr vllt. Übungstexte?:) lg:))

Hallo ich hatte als Hausaufgabe auf eine Summary über die Aborigines zu schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob die so korrekt wäre:

This is a summary about the history of the Aborigines in Australia. Before 1788 the Europeans arrive in Australia the Aborigines live very happy in family groups as hunters, fishermen and gathers. But the Europeans brought new illnesses and shot many Aborigines because they wanted the land where the Aborigines live for their farms. Thats only two reasons for the death of many Aborigines. After 1788 they must live in special areas and half cast children were given to white people to grow up on the ´white´ way. Today Aborigines often discriminated and the Australian Gonverment trying to make the life for Aborigines better.

Wäre echt toll wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob das so korrekt ist, da ich mir sehr unsicher bin.

LG

Hi Ich hab ein summary geschrieben das doofe ist es wird morgen eingesammelt ich bin echt schlecht in englisch wäre nett wenn den Text verbessern könnt danke :)

Summary: In the text "Meeting the stepmother " written by David Mitchell is about 2 children , Jason and julia who Becomes a stepmother named cynthia because his father had seperate with their mum.

After the seperation of jason's and julia's dad and their mother the father found a New girlfriend, their new stepmother. They don't know what to say because they don't like each other and never had Seen her before. At their Old House they meet together but when Jason meet his stepmother he was shocked and dissapointed by his father and what he didn't know is that cynthia had a Baby named milly . and Jason think when his father and his New stepmother Becomes a Baby what ist with ihm ? Would he has been he or a totally different Kid ?