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The Pressure Cooker
The content of the second szene from the drama "The Pressure cooker" by Steve Skidmore and Steve Barlow is an quarrel between Andrea an her mother.
First Andreas mother is getting ready to go out when Andrea enters the kitchen. Andrea is surprised at seeing her mother still in. Her mother is angry, because Andrea came late and does no housework. Furthermore she ask Andrea about her exam for which Andrea learned very hard. As she hears that her daughter has bad results, she is even angry. She tells Andreas that her son Ian have always better results. Andrea would like to go to a drama collage, but her mother is in the opinion that a university is better for her.
Her mother would not discuess about it and tells her to stop seein Graham.
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The content of the second szene from the drama "The Pressure cooker" by Steve Skidmore and Steve Barlow is an quarrel between Andrea an her mother.
First Komma Andreas mother is getting ready to go out when Andrea enters the kitchen. Andrea is surprised at seeing her mother still in. Her mother is angry kein Komma because Andrea came (Wort) late and does (Zeit) no housework. Furthermore Komma she ask Andrea about her exam for which Andrea learned (= US; BE = learnt) very hard. As she hears that her daughter has bad results, she is even angry. She tells Andreas that her son Ian have always better results. Andrea would like to go to a drama collage, but her mother is in the opinion that a university is better for her.
Her mother would not discuess about it and tells her to stop seein Graham.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
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The content of the second szene from the drama "The Pressure cooker" by Steve Skidmore . Steven Barlow has quarrel with Andrea and her mother .
First Andreas mother is getting ready to go out when Andrea enters the kitchen. She is surprised at seeing her mother still in.
ok jz hab ich keine lust mehr :D
siehe Astrids Antwort .....aber ich wurde furthermore weglassen es ist Wortmüll und schreiben
..........no housework. She also asks Andrea about......
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