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Happiness. Is there anything we are striving for more? Some people might say they are seeking money, their dream job, or maybe the love of their life. But all these goals are lifting up the parallel between work and happiness. These goals are about making you happy. But this brings us to our main question: Do we really have to work hard and sweaty to end up content and happy? The easiest way to come up with an answer is looking at the correlation of a job's earning and the feeling of happiness. Evidently, not every wealthy person died happy or content. There are thousands of billionaires not being thrilled about their great richness. They did work hard for their money, but this isn't making them feel okay. Looking at the opposite, we see poor people left with nothing leading a quite fulfilling life. They had enough time to ponder essential aspects of life and to conclude that life isn't about the biggest cars, houses, or private jets. And I am convinced that this work of thinking and absolutely correct conclusion takes a lot more effort than some moneybags made. The material the world is holding up for you if you work hard doesn't make you happy in any kind. A clear sentiment focusing on important things such as maintaining a loyal relationship with friends and family or growing up mentally results in a great life. Material is temporary, but what remains are your positive thoughts and ideas you share with people you love and your attemptment to become the best version of yourself. Dreams should follow you and not the other way around.

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Los Angeles has seen the evil

A recent school shooting in Los Angeles has brought the issue of school safety in the bad light. So, people became aware of these happening. On 30th April 2023, two 17-year-old students have armed their high school with two guns which left 11 people dead and 5 injured. This incident has left people worried about the safety of students and staff at schools.

Gun violence, especially in schools, is still a national crisis in the United States and migrants are still allowed to carry a gun because of the “national firearms agreement”. Due to the licenses of weapons, such acts are occurring more and more frequently. In order to protect students and school staff, most schools have security guards. There are also usually controls at the entrances. As a way to prevent non-schoolers from entering the school, they have their own school cards, which clearly show the identifies of the students. In addition, the police have increased their presence at schools.

Students, who have witnessed such incident, are usually traumatised and can hardly cope without psychological help. Many students and parents report terrible feelings and perceptions. “I was so scared when I heard gunshots. I ran and hid under a desk until the police came. Now I’m afraid to come back to school,” says a victim who survived this cruelty. Parents were calling desperately for their children, they even got more scared when they didn’t respond. These are just a few. As a result, the police has to deal with such incidents more and more often. “It is nothing scary anymore, we are already used to it”, claims a policeman. “We are already best prepared for such acts”, adds another officer. They have certain educations and trainings for these hardships.

Due to the school shooting on April 30th, this issue is more present than ever. Many students and parents are extremely frightened that they can also be victims. This clearly shows that much more could be done preventively.

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JOE:

Have you read the newspaper article about Susi Shine? It says she IS EXPLOITING (exploit) Chinese labourers. Actually, that SOUND (sound) terrible.

HEATHER: | AM WORKING (work) on a class project and didn't have time to read go papers. I DOUBT (doubt) that a successful celebrity like her would do anything like that.

JOE: it is true. I PROMISE (promise). After she became famous as a singer started designing clothes and shoes. She IS MAKING (make) money with her fancy dresses and her shoes. And now she even OWN (own) a company that produces her clothes and shoes in China! Three activists investigated labour conditions at this factory that SEEM (seem) to produce shoes under terrible working conditions.

HEATHER: Oh, yes. Sure, I REMEMBER (remember) the news! The three activists ARE WORKING (work) for China Labor Watch, which is based in New York.

They ARE INVESTIGATING (investigate) this factory in China. How could I forget?

JOE:

Exactly, the activists INDENT (intend) to publish a report showing that Susi Shine BELONG (belong) to the group of business people who ARE ACCEPTINV (accept) low pay, massive overtime, crude verbal

abuse and unacceptable misuse of labour in Chinese factories to increase their profit.

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hallo wollte fragen ob diese outline gut ist.

The excerpt of an article "I Know What You Did Last Math Class," written by Jan Hoffman and published in "The New York Times" on 4. May 2008, Deals with school programs for parents to check their children's grades and behavior. In the following paragraphs, we will outline the information related to the benefits of these programs, as presented in the text.

The main body of the text highlights that many parents utilize these programs to exert greater control over their children's lives, especially during a phase when teenagers seek more independence. Parents argue that the intensely competitive college admissions process compels them to frequently check their children's online grades. Interestingly, many parents who engage in regular online grade checks fondly reminisce about their own adolescence, where deception was common. The advent of programs like Edline eliminates the covert satisfaction associated with such deception. Nevertheless, parents like Mrs. Tarantino, a supporter of Power School, contend that the stakes have drastically changed, citing today's all-encompassing academic pressure compared to previous generations.

Quantifying the precise impact of these programs on academic performance proves challenging due to numerous variables. However, principals anecdotal report that these programs have succeeded in motivating parents and students who were previously challenging to engage. They have notably assisted middle school boys in improving their organizational skills.

According to Ron Jones, the principal of Huth Middle School, situated in Matteson, IIlinois, a middle-class suburb of Chicago with a 90-percent minority student population, "Edline opens up communication between parents and teachers. It helps keep the children focused on their academics." These software solutions also prove beneficial for working parents, allowing divorced parents to access information without the need for direct contact.

In Noblesville, Indiana, after a survey indicated that parents felt adequately informed through PowerSchool and subsequent email exchanges with teachers, the middle-school principal decided to forego parent-teacher conferences and allocate the time back to classroom instruction.

In conclusion, these programs have both advantages and disadvantages. They enhance communication between parents and teachers, motivate parents and students, and cater to the needs of working parents. However, accurately quantifying their impact on academic performance remains challenging, and concerns regarding student privacy persist.

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