hallo wollte fragen ob diese outline gut ist.

The excerpt of an article "I Know What You Did Last Math Class," written by Jan Hoffman and published in "The New York Times" on 4. May 2008, Deals with school programs for parents to check their children's grades and behavior. In the following paragraphs, we will outline the information related to the benefits of these programs, as presented in the text.

The main body of the text highlights that many parents utilize these programs to exert greater control over their children's lives, especially during a phase when teenagers seek more independence. Parents argue that the intensely competitive college admissions process compels them to frequently check their children's online grades. Interestingly, many parents who engage in regular online grade checks fondly reminisce about their own adolescence, where deception was common. The advent of programs like Edline eliminates the covert satisfaction associated with such deception. Nevertheless, parents like Mrs. Tarantino, a supporter of Power School, contend that the stakes have drastically changed, citing today's all-encompassing academic pressure compared to previous generations.

Quantifying the precise impact of these programs on academic performance proves challenging due to numerous variables. However, principals anecdotal report that these programs have succeeded in motivating parents and students who were previously challenging to engage. They have notably assisted middle school boys in improving their organizational skills.

According to Ron Jones, the principal of Huth Middle School, situated in Matteson, IIlinois, a middle-class suburb of Chicago with a 90-percent minority student population, "Edline opens up communication between parents and teachers. It helps keep the children focused on their academics." These software solutions also prove beneficial for working parents, allowing divorced parents to access information without the need for direct contact.

In Noblesville, Indiana, after a survey indicated that parents felt adequately informed through PowerSchool and subsequent email exchanges with teachers, the middle-school principal decided to forego parent-teacher conferences and allocate the time back to classroom instruction.

In conclusion, these programs have both advantages and disadvantages. They enhance communication between parents and teachers, motivate parents and students, and cater to the needs of working parents. However, accurately quantifying their impact on academic performance remains challenging, and concerns regarding student privacy persist.

Hi Guys,

wir werden ein Englischarbeit nächste Woche schreiben über “analyzing the language of poem”. Wir müssen keinen Text/Analyse schreiben, sindern bekommen eine Tabelle mit verschiedenen stylistic devices und diese müssen wir dann bestimmen und Funktion + Wirkung nennen.
Wenn ich jetzt in der Arbeit so einen Satz kriegen würde:

She broke my heart.
würde dann reichen wenn ich Folgendes aufschreiben würde.

• Metaphor
• It means that the girl left the person and made this person sad.
• This metaphor creates vivid picture in the reader’s mind and makes the reader feel also sad.

Dankeschön im Voraus

See u soon!

Bye flops

The ending of Belinda’s story

Two days later James phoned Belinda.

“Hello?” Belinda said.

“Hello? Belinda? Oh my god! Is it really you?

Belinda was shocked. She recognized James by his voice. She didn’t know what to say. Tears fell down her cheeks.

“Why didn’t you call me the last year? I counted the seconds until you phone me, but you never did it.” she said crying.

When James heard her crying, he started crying too. “I’m so sorry Belinda. I lost your phone number. I tried to find you but have not been able to. Please let us meet. I want to see you again. I really missed you.”

“Me too” Belinda said.

The next day they met each other in a café. They talked for hours and decided to go the next week on a date.

2 years later the married and one year after the marriage they had a little baby. It was a girl and they named her “Amour” because it meant “love” in French, and she was the result of their love. 

Ich mein z. B. wenn man so was sagt wie:

"In many other languages, you use the verb ..."

"In lots of other languages, you use the verb ..."

Oder sind die Synonyme?

Ich hab diese Mediation geschrieben und wollte fragen, wie ich den verbessern könnte oder ob das so passt:

Hello Stefan,

since you've told me you're looking for a holiday job in London, I've been searching for different work options and came across a quite popular restaurant called "Herman ze German". Firsty, you need to know what the owner's idea of opening this restaurant was and how it came to this restaurant.

As the owners, Falak Shahi and Florian, are of the opinion that German sausages aren't comparable to English ones, their friends have taken the intiative to bring them original sausages made in German. So the couple decided to sell their sausages in local pups so called "sausageweeks". As an upgrade they started to sell their sausages on a music festival which has contributed to high success. In 2010 they opened their first restaurant located in London. Maybe you're wondering why this restaurant did blow up and has attracted so much attention.This is because Germany is very popular in UK and Berlin is seen as a trendy city. But what also plays a big role is German and English people raising awarness of how close we actually are and not as different as they thought to be. Falakshahi and Florian are also playing with cliches and have decorated their restaurants full of cliches. That seems to many clients pretty hilarious and cool. The last thing I want to address is their future objectives. They are dreaming that two or three new restaurants will open within a year and sausages will be offered with their own logo in English grocery stores. I hope this text could inspire you a little on your job search and was interesting to read.

Take care!

Hey,

Wenn ich auf Englisch auf "I will think about you a lot" antworten will "Ich werde auch viel über dich nachdenken" Ist es dann korrekt wenn ich schreibe "I will think about you a lot too" oder muss man unbedingt "I will also think about you a lot" schreiben?

Ich schreibe Videospiel-Reviews und habe eine Sparte wo ich "meine Highlights" zu einem Spiel aufzähle. Aber ich bräuchte noch ein paar Ideen, was ich noch reinschreiben könnte, was vielleicht auch die Leute interessieren könnte! Folgende habe ich schon:

Größes Highlight, Größter Fail, Schlimmstes Erlebnis, Lieblingswelt, Lieblingsmission, Lieblingscharakter, Lieblinsmusik

Bedenkt, dass manche Kategorien je nach Spiel mit anderen ersetzt werden oder ausgelassen werden können. Was cool wäre, wäre wine Kategorie, die man fast überall benutzen kann.

Also wir haben eine Aufgabe erhalten, einen inneren Monolog (wird benotet) von einer Frau zu schreiben, die übers Handy erfahren hat, dass ihr Mann gestorben ist. Es stand dabei, dass Kreativität gern gesehen ist. Nun hatte ich die Idee ein gehaltenes Handy zu zeichnen, wo sie Nachrichten geschrieben hat, die aber von ihrem Mann ja nicht gelesen werden können. Ihr innerer Monolog wird in der Form der Nachrichten verpackt sein. Soweit ich jedoch weiß, passiert der Monolog nur im Kopf und wird nicht laut ausgesprochen. Denkt ihr meine Lehrerin lässt meine Idee zählen, da es ja nicht wirklich im Kopf passiert ist, sondern geschrieben wurde?

Danke im Voraus!

Hallo!

Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Folgende Punkte müssen beantwortet werden:

• give information about the centre
• discuss why being there is beneficial for the refugees
• suggest events to bring the community closer together

Use your time! – Everybody is welcome! (Hauptüberschrift)

Have you ever thought about joining the local youth centre Yolo? Wouldn’t you like to make new friends and have fun while learning new skills? If yes, then we have an exciting opportunity for you.

What is the Yolo local youth centre?

Yolo is a place where young people come together to learn and build a sense of community. We provide various activities that can help you improve your German and social skills, as well as your computer skills. This can ultimately increase your chances of finding a job.

Why Yolo is the best!

Learning German is an essential skill for refugees and migrants living in Germany. Not only in your job, also when you ask for advice. Yolo provides a supportive environment for young refugees to learn and practice German, while also meeting and interacting with other young people in their community.

But guess what: That is not all. The world also gets more and more modern. You learn everything you need to know about computers nowadays at this centre.

Events to bring the community closer together!

At Yolo, we organize several social events every week to bring our community closer together. These events include cultural festivals, sports tournaments, and even swimming trips. One of our most popular events is the weekly football match on Saturdays. It's a great way to get active and have fun with other teenagers.

So what are you waiting for? Join us today by writing to youthcentreyolo@gmail.com .

And if you are feeling overwhelmed, do not hesitate to contact our support.

See you soon!

Hallo liebe Community,

ich wollte euch fragen, ob ihr eventuell meinen Englisch Text korrigieren und wenn der Satz generell nicht stimmen sollte, umschreiben könnt? Ich habe versuch in ein leichtes Englisch zu schreiben, weil meine Lehrerin das auch besser bewertet also ein kompliziertes Englisch. Ich würde mich echt freuen wenn ihr mir helfen könnt! :)

Hi Leah,

I came across your blog post about your opinion about Shakespeare's poems. You claim that they are all boring and have strange illusions. Well, I really don't agree with you, but I want to introduce you one of my favourite poems by William Shakespear "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"

Let me summarize this masterpiece for you: The Sonnet starts with a flattering question "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?". William Shakespeare explains that his love is as beautiful as the most beautiful things in the world, such as a summer’s day. In the next line, he rejects this idea immediately. He says that the beauty of summer is fleeting and that it will eventually be replaced by the harshness of winter. However, the speaker also claims that the person’s beauty will be immortalized in the poem, since her beauty will supposedly never fade or die. This special thing about her is what gives her life and it’s a tribute to how couples see their partner as the only one for them.

In my opinion, it is a poem of admiration and adoration, almost certainly the best known piece of Shakespeare’s work. The simplicity and loveliness of this poem is outstanding and one of the main reasons for the poem’s success. The major themes in Sonnet 18 are the timelessness, nature, love, beauty and the death and immortality. I think the main theme is timeless and I specifically like it because it is a deeper theme of immortalization. Lack of time is a theme that has and will affect humans forever and therefore the wish for eternity reflects a universal experience.

Let me know what you think now about this poem. Don't worry, I am not mad if you still defend your opinion but let me know if you have changed your mind! :)

Ich muss einen 2-seitigen Aufsatz darüber schreiben, dass ich kein UNO im Unterricht spielen darf. Kann mir da jemand helfen ? Denn ich weiß nicht wie.

Danke schon mal im Voraus. :)

Hello dear xxx and Mr. xxx,

I would like to introduce myself to you.

My Name is xxx but people call me xxx. I am 17 Years old, I am turning 18 in three months. I was born in Albania, in the capital city Tirana. I have 4 siblings 3 brothers and 1 sister, my brothers are called xxx, xxx and xxx. My sister’s name is xxx. They are all older than me. My oldest brother is 29, he still lives in Albania with his wife and they also already have 2 children. Me, my parents and my other siblings moved to Germany when I was 10 Years old. Now we live in xxx. I learned German very quickly. But in the beginning it was hard to find new friends.

I’d also like to tell you something about my hobbies and interests. I like cycling very much, but I hate soccer. During the rest of my spare time I surf on the internet or I often meet friends and go shopping. After school I would like to do a technical diploma. My dream is it to work as a stewardess because I like to travel and because it has been a passion of mine since I was a kid. I also want to learn more about other cultures and the languages.

Hallo, ich muss einen Aufsatz für Deutsch schreiben zu dem Thema "warum müssen wir zur Schule gehen" aber mir fällt nichts besonders gutes ein. Wenn jemand Ideen hat wäre es wirklich super, würdet ihr kurz schreiben👍

Hallo, ich musste gestern eine Strafarbeit machen, ich sollte einen Aufsatz (Schilderung) zum Thema „eine peinliche Situation“ schreiben, dies habe ich auch gemacht und dann abgegeben.

ich habe meine Lehrerin gefragt, was sie denn mit den Aufsatz machen wolle, sie meint „Du wirst dich hier vorne hin stellen und ihn vorlesen, dann werden wir alle lachen“. Dass heißt, sie will mich vor der ganzen Klasse bloß stellen.

Wie solle ich mich morgen (beim geforderten Vorlesen) verhalten? Verweigern? Sagen: ich lese es ihnen nur unter 4 Augen vor?

Danke!

Wie habt ihr es gemacht, falls es bei euch erfolgreich war?
Schreibe in 2,5 Wochen Deutsch-Abi und will mir die Gedichtsanalyse als Plan B bereithalten.
Geht ums Bayern Abi, falls das was ändert.

Hi:)

Ich muss in Deutsch ein Aufsatz (Kommentar/ Material gestütztes Schreiben) über Gendern schreiben. Hat jemand eine gute Idee für einen ansprechendenTitel? Der Text ist contra gendern.

LG