Kann mir jemand hierbei helfen?

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Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone. …, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, …, you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door. …, outside the house it was even worse. …, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. … there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. …, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. …, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Ich habe das so gemacht, aber bin mir da nicht so sicher:

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone.  First of all, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, possibly , you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door.  But outside the house it was even worse. For example, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. Perhaps, there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. For one thing, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. All in all, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Englisch lernen, Schule, USA, Unterricht, Text, Übersetzung, Abitur, Aufsatz, Englisch-Deutsch, englische Grammatik, Englischunterricht, Grammatik, Hausaufgaben, Rechtschreibung, summary, comment
Kann jemand kurz über meine Summary rüber gucken und Feedback geben?

Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischklausur mit den Themen Summary und Comment, da ich in letzter Zeit aufgrund von Krankheit sehr oft im Unterricht gefehlt habe, habe ich daher nicht so viel Lernstoff mitbekommen. Ich habe mich gerade eben an einen Text ran gemacht und eine Summary dazu geschrieben. Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn jemand kurz drüber gucken könnte, um mir Feedback zu geben (einen Comment schreibe ich gleich noch, den werde ich nachher höchstwahrscheinlich ebenefalls hochladen).

Der original Text:

Meine Summary:

The article "The Dark Solitude of a Lockdown", published on September 10,2020 from Jenny Stevens deals with the reasons why the author moves into an own apartment but notice during the Lockdown, that she want to live in a flat.

In the beginning of the article, the author weites about that she lived for the past eight months at her friends apartment but decides to move into her own because of mental health. At first she enjoys the time and the place for her own, even when there are some quiet and boring days. During the Lockdown her mind changes although she stays in contact with her friends, but after some time she feeled lonely and getting jealous of her friends who are in a flat together. At this Point she decides, that she wants to live in a flat in the future. In the end of the text a friend ask her to move into his flat.

In a nutshell, she ist going to move into the flat with her friend and some others.

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Vielen Dank an jeden !!

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