Hallo,ich schreibe am Dienstag meine Englisch Prüfung für mein Fachabi....kann mir jemand diese Operatoren erklären und wie sich diese voneinander unterscheiden bzw.ob ich die beiden richtig verstanden habe:

Summary :ist doch einfach Einleitungssatz und dann den Text zusammenfassen oder?

Comment:eine persönliche Stellungnahme zu dem Text?

Point out: weiß ich leider nicht

Outline: leider auch nicht

Wäre sehr lieb wenn jemand antwortet und mir Tipps geben könnte

Lg

Hey, ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit, in der ich unteranderem eine Summery und Analyse * IN EINEM* schreiben soll.

aber ich habe keine Ahnung, wie ich das anstellen soll.

ich weiß bereits, wie man beides getrennt schreibt. Aber wir sollen eine summary schreiben und dann Übergang zur Analyse.

Hat vielleicht jmd aus seiner Schulzeit eine Musterlösung davon, damit ich mir das iwie besser vorstellen kann?

The article “Bag lady” from the magazine mail of Sunday by Rebecca Hosking is about the environment and marine pollution Rebecca Hosking went to Hawaii for a documentary for the BBC . She is a lady which is committed to the environment. Also she wanted to watch the beauty of Hawaii. But when she was there she was shocked about the situation. Because they was a lot of dead albatross chicks and a lot of trash which came from the ocean to hawaii

Wir müssen in der Englischarbeit eine Summary schreiben. Wahrscheinlich von einer Rede. Eigentlich verwendet man in Summarys ja Simple Present. Da ich aber Worte eines anderen wiedergebe, muss ich ja Backshift machen, also eine Zeit zurücksetzen.

Bsp: I am nice. He says, he was nice.

Darf man bzw. muss man das in einer Summary?

Brauche dies für die Schule. Bin in Englisch aber nicht so gut und brauche daher einen kurzen Summary über diesen Text. Wäre gut wenn Ihr mir helfen könntet....

Hallo, wir schreiben morgen eine Klassenarbeit und ich hätte gerne das ihr mal meine Summary anschaut und auf Fehler untersucht.Außerdem wäre es gut wenn sie nicht mehr als 90 Wörter hätte aber 100 sind auch noch gerade so okay.Wo kann ich kürzen?

Alex an 18 years old boy from London passes his exam and visit his father,who lives in Australia now,first since 16 years.During their trip to Queensland are many ups and downs in the relationship between both.Alex feels in Tom more a friend as a father.He also knows Dani who plays in a band and he replace the bass guitarest.Alex and Dani fall in love with each other.The band is number 1 in the charts and goes on tour around Australia before they break up.Alex goes with Dani back to London and study there.

Es wäre nett, wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet und mich auf Fehler hinweist und mir vielleicht Verbesserungstipps zur gebt.

The book 'Paranoid Park' was written by Blake Nelson, which was published in year 2006 in Portland, Oregon. The text deals with a young skater names Alex, who is doing illegal things, and who kills a security guard in self defense.

The young skater is the main character of the story. He is 16 years old. And is at his uncle Tommy's beach house.

One evening he decides to go there with his best friend Jared, but Jared wants to see his girlfriend and so he doesn't go with Alex to Paranoid Park.

Alex decides to go alone to Paranoid Park and when he is there, he sits on his skateboard and watches the skaters and girls there.

A streeter called Scratch comes along with his friends and after a short talk Scratch asks Alex whether he wants to hop a train.

Fascinated by the idea of hopping train Alex agrees and they leave Paranoid Park.

While riding the train, they are seen by a security guard who immediately chases them and starts to hit Scratch with his nightstick.

After Alex sees that he hits the security guard with his skateboard.

The man stumbles and falls forward on the gravel beside the train.

The coming train pulls him along and he is twisted into an awkward position under the train.

After the train has passed, the security guard has been cut in half.

After this horrible accident Alex is totally in panic and he doesn't know what he should do in a situation like that.

He is totally confused, because he wants to tell the police but he is too afraid of the consequences and he decides to keep first that accident to himself.

Totally confused the main character starts to run....

Und noch eine Summary: Fehler, Verbesserungsvorschläge?

The short story 'Going home', written by Pete Hamill, an American journalist deals with Vingo,a former prisoner, going home and telling his story. On a bus, six young people, three boys and three girs from New York are going to Florida on holiday. Also a man, a former prisoner called Vingo sits in the same bus on his way home to Brunswick. The young people are thinking about their holiday when they notice that the man never moves and does not say anything at all. The bus stops at a restaurant and everybody gets off exept Vingo. The young people start to wonder about his behavior. When they come back, one of them, a girl, sits beside him, introduces herself and starts a small conversation. She offers him some wine, which Vingo gratefully accepts. After a while the girl goes back to the other, when the man is nearly about to fall asleep. The next morning he goes into the restaurant to the young people. He orders coffee and smokes nervously. When the girl sits with him again in the bus he starts to tell her his story. Vingo has been in prison for the last three and a half years and had been now released. He is going home, to his town called Brunswick. The girl asks him if he is marred, to which he replies that he does not know that. He wrote to his wife that it is okay for him if she does not want to stay with him togehter anymore or if she found a new man, but she never answered. He wrote to her that, if she does not think this way, she should put a yellow handkerchief on the big oak tree in their town, so that he knows that she still wants him back. He also showes the girl and the others pictures of his wife and his three children. When the bus reaches Brunswick all the young people, who got to know his story too, are shouting and screaming, because the oak tree is covered with a lot of yellow handkerchiefs. Vingo is not shouting. He gets up from his seat slowly and stars his way home.

Ich schreibe am nächsten Montag eine Englischarbeit. Ich bin in der 9. Klasse. Wir bekommen eine Kurzgeschichte oder etwas in der Art mit offenem Ende und müssen dazu dann eine Summary, eine Charakterisierung von einer Person und eine Ende schreiben. Da ich in letzter Zeit immer gut damit gefahren bin, vorher die Texte vorzuschreiben, würde ich dies auch diesmal gerne machen. Allerdings finde ich keinen passenden Text.Es wäre super wenn jemand einen passenden Text kennen würde und villeicht noch ein paar Tipps geben würde. Im Unterricht haben wir The Outbak aus dem Buch English G21 A5 bearbeitet.

hallo, ich schreibe am freitag eine englischarbeit, in der eine summary vorkommt. (klasse 7) ich weiß, dass man diese eigentlich in present schreiben muss aber muss man sie wirklich durchgängig im present schreiben? ich finde es dumm denn der text spielt im past und es hört sich komisch an wenn man das alles ins present setzt ... darf man teilweise auch past verwenden?

beispielsatz: in the late 1870s they lived in jacobs valley in idaho ...

ich finde es würde sich komisch anhören wenn man den in der summary plötzlich im present schreiben müsste, da es ja eindeutig 1870 war und keine gegenwart... vielen dank schon mal vorweg

sina

Was bedeuten die einzelnen Buchstaben beim tattsatz ? Das erste t Titel das a Autor Das zweite t Thema ?? Und was das 4. ? Kann mir bitte jemand helfen

In Chapter 3 of the novel „No Tigers in Africa“, written by Norman Silver, published in 1990, the main character Selwyn explains his familiar situation, especially the difficult relationship between his father and his mother, and his resulting problems by comparing the events in Bristol with those in South Africa. The action is set at Bristol in the present and the narrator remembers details of his dormer life in South Africa.

At the beginning Selwyn tells about how hard his father works, so that they could have the same standard of living as they had in Africa. However he says that for his mother the situation is difficult too, because in Africa she used to have a good life with lots of friends, but not in England. In addition he criticises how difficult it is to make friends in England in contrast to Africa and says because of that problem, his mother is not (oder no?) longer her old self, she is uncertain. Besides that he compares the situation in England with their move from Cape Town to Johannesburg, when he was seven. Selwyn admits that he needs time to “arrive”, but that the time, when they settle to Joburg, was actually more easy than settle to this country. After he mention he often skips school and goes to a place where he could see the gorge and the suspension bridge, however he hears that that bridge is a favourite place for suicides and finds similarities to his situation. Thereafter the narrator speaks about Brunel and the Voortrekker Monument which was built because of the victory of the whites over the blacks years ago in South Africa. Moreover he describes his feelings when he stays at the gorge at this time by comparing it with the thoughts he had when he looked over the railway of the Voortrekker monument, because there was a voice in his had, saying he should jump. However the voice means that he should jump over the cliffs inside him .He concludes that he needs to built such a bridge, metaphoric meaning, inside him. On top of that Selwyn tells when he walks once from gorges to the market, where he is instead of school often too, one day he recognizes his mother who is cheating on his dad with a black man. This is a big shock for him. The boy tries to explain his feelings, says he is confused and cannot believe what has happened. Selwyn describes his condition by comparing it with the a ground which has opened under his feet, describes that it is deeper than the liftshaft his dad fell down once at Christmas after he has drunk too much. Finally Selwyn feels very bad and sick, basically helpless and lost, he does not know what to do and starts to be silent again.

Sers, ich schreib morgen ne englisch arbeit und da soll ich vorraussichtlich ne outline schreiben. was ist denn der unterschied zwischen ner outline und ner summary?

danke

Halloo. Also, eine Freundin und ich haben hier ein kleines Problem. Wir schreiben bald in Englisch eine summary als Arbeit, haben aber ein paar Probleme mit der Zusammenfassung. Als Beispiel hatten wir den Text "Barney" - Will Stanton. Den Text verstehen wir, den Aufbau auch, nur das mit den Zeiten usw. kriegen wir nicht hin. Habt ihr vielleicht ein Beispiel für uns, das wir auch auf andere Texte "übertragen" können??

Auch problematisch könnte es werden, wenn ein Text in past perfect geschrieben ist. Da kann man doch nicht einfach überall simple present draus machen? Das klingt doch komisch :o

Ein Bespiel oder einfach so Hilfe wären nett, Links zu anderen Seiten werden uns allerdings vermutlich nicht mehr weiterhelfen;)

Liebe Grüüße

summary bzw inhaltsangabe

Hey ihr lieben,

ich soll morgen eine Summary in Englisch schreiben. Klappt auch alles super außer der Einleitungssatz , könnte mir vielleicht jemand ein Muster schreiben, es sollte nicht zu langweilig sein, ich möchte die Lehrerin beeindrucken,

thanks ;)

Hay also....wir schreiben demnächst eine reproduktion in Englisch ...also eine Nacherzählung einer Geschichte die wir bekommen ! jedoch hab ich noch 2 Fragen... 1. Welche Zeit muss man benutzen ? 2. Darf man wörtliche Rede reinbringen ?

Danke im Vorraus ;)

hallo ihr lieben ich schreibe bald eine englisch klausur in der wir eine Summary schreiben müssen und ich bräuchte mal eure hilfe für den richtigen einleitungssatz

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The advantages and disadvantages in an exhibition as a company for aircraft manufacturers

Einleitung: In this comment, I will discuss the pros and cons of presenting one’s own company at an exhibition.

Hauptteil:

+ In the first line, its good for the company, that they can quickly make contacts fastly, for example by exchanging the data when talking to customers.

- Possible drawbacks include that after a customer conversation everything must be keep up to date so that the customer does not disappear quickly. And for that you also need time.

+ Technically speaking, the team is better able to present they product. An example is, that they can show the Engines at the same time and Place.

– When planning to appear at such events, companies should not forget the heavy things, which needs to transported. All this will cost many energy and time. Such as all the engines are lightweigt for an airplane, but not for the employer. 

+ Its an easy way for the company, to make advertisment. For example telling them the benefits from the company, such as lightweight, sustainable etc. 

– At the same time, there is great competition and leads to competitive pressure, as most similar companies are also at such an event.

Schluss: In my opinion it doesn't really worth it to be at an exhibition, all the nerves, losses time and the pressure etc. I would think about that two times. Maybe only if I have enough time and the desire to do that.