Englisch-Article?

Hallo, ich habe einen English-Article über Holidays geschrieben.

Enthalten muss sein:

  1. positive Dinge über deine Ferien
  2. negative Dinge über deine Ferien

Habt ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge?:

Holidays make the life better

Nearly everybody go on vacation in their holidays. Fortunately, my family do this every year.

 

During my last summer holidays my family and I went to Italy to a theme park called ,,Luna Park”. The good things were that I spent a lot of time with my family and my brother and I rode several rides, for example ,,White Shark” or ,,Xtreme”. Another funny moment was when my sister was spat at by a llama. Moreover, I could convince my mother to go swimming in the sea because it was really hot in Italy. We had about 30 degrees Celsius. “Luna Park” has access to sea, which I really appreciated. For me food is one of the most important things in the world and that is why I was happy to see such good meals at the restaurant. Of course, this food was not cheap, but I think it was worth it.

But there were not only good memories because when we were eating in a restaurant we saw an ambulance and an injured child. I think the child had had an accident in the playground. The paramedics took care of the child and he was allowed to go back to his parents. Furthermore, this theme park was crowded with tourists. In my opinion, this destroys the pleasure of holidays.

 

All in all, I have to say that it was a nice vacation and I hope everybody will have such good holidays.

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