Wie kann ich meine englisch Präsentation verbessern?

Hi diese englisch Präsentation ist für den 1 teil meiner mündlichen Prüfung und ich habe das Gefühl das die Struktur schrecklich ist, kann mir jemand helfen?

Das ist die Präsentation wie sie jetzt ist:

Hi my name is xy and today I will present to you the Job of a dentist.

A dentist is responsible for anything regarding the health of the mouth, including teeth, gums and dental issues.They need to be licensed to perform their duties.

Dentists can be general practitioners or specialized in specific areas (e.g. pediatric dentistry, endodontists or periodontist dentistry). In this case they'll need to develop specific dentist skills. Often they are required to complete additional studies.

Some general dentist duties include conducting oral screenings to idendiseases and infections, removing tooth decay and plaque. They also need to apply prosthetics,sealers and whiteners.

A dentists responsibility is to have experience in this department more specifically experience with dental equipment and tools, surgeries and teeth extractions. Dentists should have a pleasant and compassionate personality with the ability to make patients feel comfortable. Some qualities they should have are attention to detail and the ability to remain calm under pressure.

To become a dentist you need to have the license "doctor of dental surgery (DDS)", "doctor of medicine in dentistry (DMD)" or a similar degree that gives license to practice the dentist profession.

I choose this Job because I used to have braces for about three years and therefore had regular check ups and appointments with both my orthodontics and my dentist. Because of that my interest in this department grew a lot and I decided to present this job to you.

What fascinated me is the unique skill associated with dentistry. The job provides you with the opportunity to learn to learn how to manipulate various drills, instruments and materials to physically create the desired product weather its an extraction or a crown, there is a specific and unique technique and skill required for each procedure and I find that very interesting and unique.

Most people I've met hate going to the dentist but I personally really love it because of the great interactions I have with my dentist and how they educate me about me about the importance of dental hygiene.

I'd like to thank you for you attention and let me know if there are any questions.

Ich brauche das ganz schnell weil ich mir EXTREM unsicher bin ob ich das so vortragen kann.

Danke!!!!!

Englisch, Schule, Sprache, Präsentation, mündliche Prüfung
DELF B1 mündliche Prüfung Vorstellung?

Helloooo,

Ich habe bald meine mündliche DELF B1 Prüfung und hab für die erste Aufgabe, also mich vorstellen, schon etwas geschrieben. Könnte da mal jemand, der gut in französisch ist oder die Prüfung auch gemacht hatte drüber schauen und was verbessern?
dankeschön ;))

Je m‘appelle Lena, j‘ai 16 ans et je suis née le première octobre (...). J‘habite à (...) avec ma mère, mon père et ma soeur. Ma mère qui a (...) ans s‘appelle (...). Elle est une proffesseure et travailles dans une école a (...) où elle enseignes (...) et (...). Mon père qui s‘appelle (...) a (...) ans et travailles comme un (...) à (...). Ma soeur s‘appelle (...) et elle a, comme moi, 16 ans. Nous sommes des jummelles.

J‘ai aussi un frère qui s‘appelle (...). Il a (...) ans et vives avec sa propre famille a (...).

Ma famille vient de russie et parfois nous parlons aussi russe à la maison.

J‘ai deux animals domestiques. Avant j‘avais un chat qui a appellé (...) mais maintenant J’ai une tortue et un chien. Ma tortue s‘appelle (...) et a (...) ans. Mon chien s‘appelle (...) et il a (...) ans. J‘aime apprendre a mon chien des nouvelles choses et aller a promener avec lui.

Je vais au lycée (...). La pluspart du temps je vais a l‘école avec le bus et parfois avec le vélo. Je veux faire mon baccalauréat et après ça je veux étudier à une Universitée. J‘aimerais travailler comme une proffesseure plus tarde et je veux enseigner les matières français et anglais. Cettes sont mes matières preferées parce que j‘aime les langues.

Pendant mon temps libre je chante et je joue du piano. J‘adore la musique. Mes chanteuses preferées sont Lena Meyer Landrut et Jess Glynne. J‘ai aussi des chansons preferées, „dear L“ et „Take me Home“.

De plus j‘aime lire des livres, en particulier les livres anglais et regarder des séries. Actuellement je lire le livre „how to be happy“ et ma série preferée est „Atypical“

Schule, Prüfung, Französisch, mündliche Prüfung, Delf B1
Mündliche Prüfung Englisch?

Hey, bin in der 10. Klasse und habe demnächst eine Mündliche Prüfung in Englisch. Wir müssen eine Bildbeschreibung auf sagen, die wir schon zuhause vorbereitet haben. Das ist meine Bildbeschreibung:

The first picture I'd like to describe is picture number 8. It's a picture of the time of the Northern Ireland conflict, and it's a black-and-white photo. In the foreground you can see a child who is probably on his way going to school or just being alone on the streets. Next to the child there are cars, which are on fire along with looking destroyed. Trash is on the ground including smash objects. It could be possible that someone was bombing that place, but I'm doubting that because as can be seen there is a huge, attentive building in the background. Neither the building is destroyed, nor the windows. It's difficult to determine which color the building has, but is has graffities on it. This shows, that perhaps that area is kind of a poverty or even ghetto area, first because of the graffities and second because of the destroyed cars. Let's go back to the little boy in the centre. He is holding an object, which I guess he found on the street. In fact, he isn't looking happy like a child would look or be. For me, he seems angry and a bit sad. The boy is wearing a jacket as well as pants in several colors, and he is wearing a pair of shoes. Not to overlook, there is a smoke which is coming from the fire of the car. The atmosphere is definitely depressing.

Meine Fragen sind, ob es gut ist, welche grammatikalische Fehler es gibt, was ich verbessern kann, welche Note ihr geben würdet, usw?

Hier ist nochmal das Bild zusehen, kann ich da noch was hinzufügen?

Danke!

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Englisch, Bilder, Schule, Prüfung, Abschluss, Grammatik, mündliche Prüfung, Beschreibung

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