Englisch?
Sind die Sätze richtig gekürzt?
,,A teenager who was caught stealing money from his classmates was ordered to pay the money back.“ > A teenager caught stealing money from his classmates was ordered to pay the money back
,,The boy who works as a judge learned about teen courts from his teacher“ -> The boy working as a judge learned about teen courts from his teacher
,,The sentences are passed by a teen court can help young criminals to get back on the right path“ -> The sentences passed by a teen court can help young criminals to get back on the right path.
,,The girl who helps some of the young criminals at the trial wants to be a lawyer when she is older.“ -> The girl helping some of the young criminals at the trial wants to be a lawyer when she is older.
Wenn etwas falsch ist, bitte mit Begründung!
1 Antwort
Hallo,
schauen wir uns die Sätze einmal an:
,,A teenager who was caught stealing money from his classmates was ordered to pay the money back.“ > A teenager caught stealing money from his classmates was ordered to pay the money back
-> OK
,,The boy who works as a judge learned about teen courts from his teacher“ -> The boy working as a judge learned about teen courts from his teacher
-> OK
,,The sentences are passed by a teen court can help young criminals to get back on the right path“ -> The sentences passed by a teen court can help young criminals to get back on the right path.
Hier finde ich den Ausgangssatz komisch ... Fehlt da vielleicht ein "and" ? Also: The sentences are passed by a teen court and can help young criminals to get back on the right path. Ohne dieses "and" wäre der Satz unvollständig.
,,The girl who helps some of the young criminals at the trial wants to be a lawyer when she is older.“ -> The girl helping some of the young criminals at the trial wants to be a lawyer when she is older.
-> OK
LG