Ist mein English Aufsatz richtig?
Last week I went with my family to New York. We took a plane what took 10 hour fly from Vienna to New York. When we arrived there we went at first to Time Square to visit Broadway. We saw Shakespeare's play what was the best play we ever saw. After that we went to Manhattan to book a hotel there and when we finished with that we went to the Central Park. We saw there a lot of Artist Man and when it was night we turned back to our hotel and at the next day we went at home in Austria.
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Last week I went with my family to New York (Satzstellung). We took a plane what (Wort) took (Wiederholung) 10 hour (Grammatik) fly (Wort) from Vienna to New York. When we arrived there (Komma) we went (---) first to Time Square to visit (Wort) Broadway (Satzstellung). We saw (Wort) (Hier fehlt etwas.) Shakespeare's play (welches?) what (Wort) was the best play we ever saw (Grammatik). After that (Komma) we went to Manhattan to book a hotel there and when we finished (Grammatik) (---) (Komma) we went to (---) Central Park. We saw there (Satzstellung) a lot of Artist Man (RS, Grammatik) and when it was night (Wendung) we turned back (Verb) to our hotel and at the (Wendung, Grammatik) next day we went (---) home (Präposition) Austria.
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:-) AstridDerPu
Last week, my family and I went to New York by plane.
Du sagst, du wärst dort hingegangen und hättest sie netterweise Mal mitgenommen, weil in deinem Handgepäck noch Platz für einen Menschen war.
last week i went to new york with my family
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last week, me and my family went to new york
Wen ich es richtig mit der Satzstellung verstanden habe heißt es " I went with my family to New York last week" oder?