Kurzer Bericht über meinen Urlaub in New York!
Wir sollen einen kurzen Bericht über die ferien in New York schreiben und ich wollte wissen ob mein Bericht okay ist.
In my last holidays my family and I were in New York. First we went to our hotel and slept 8 hours. Then we ate Bagels at ,,Deli". Subsequently we visited to Central Park. There we saw the Statue of Liberty. I had forgot my camera in the hotel and I don't take photos. Later we were on the empire state building. The empire state building is very high. At the night we went to the time square and everything was bling bling. We saw many big screens. It was my best holidays in my life.
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Ich kann dir nicht garantieren das es richtig ist was ich hier schreibe, aber klingt meiner Meinung nach nach besserem Englisch.
Then we ate bagels at '' Deli's'' Subsequently we visited Central Park (auch nicht mit 'the' .. das ist 100% falsch) ..and I don't took photos. the empire state building was very high
jup aber don't took photos kann man nicht sagen, entweder didn't take photos oder halt couldn't take oder wasn't able to :)
..we visited central parc...i had forgotten my camera, so i couldn't take...in the evening... it have been my best holidays ever... so würd ich das machen :p
Dankeee und ist also das was ich geschrieben habe falsch?
ja also das was ich jetzt verbessert hab war falsch :p der rest war ok :)
Dankeee für die schnelle Antwort