Hab ich diesen Brief auf englisch richtig geschrieben?
Dear Mom and Dear Dad,
I went abseil with my class today. You know, that I am afraid of something like that, since I also have high altitude. Actually, I wanted to be sick for this day. But it didn't work, because the doctor had closed. Now I had to with. I had a queasy feeling.
When my class and I arrive at the mountain,our teacher introduced the team leader. He looked friendly. But I was scared and me got bad. Jake the team leader showed us how to tighten the (strap) harness to your body. The team leader checked our belts. Then he showed us how to fix the rope to the strap properly. He also checks this.
Then it was time. We all had to climb down one after the other. I stayed as only above. Jake said to me,that I now come down. I said to him that I do not want. Then have me myself but dared.
Suddenly it happened. I slipped and became bad. I got the panic. Jake reassured me so I could be saved. I'm glad to be back on the ground.
Your Tim
Danke schon mal
2 Antworten
Vergiss nicht, dass "ed" am Ende eines Verbes zu setzen.
Du hast manchmal mit, manchmal ohne geschrieben.
In welcher Klasse bist du denn? Ich denke da gibt es schon einige Dinge die du anders schreiben solltest.