Twilight Inhaltsangabe englisch?
Hallo ^^ ich muss Mittwoch ein Referat auf Englisch über Twilight halten. Ich hab schon einen Text und wollte gerne wissen ob die Inhaltsangabe so geht :) Danke schon mal für alle Tipps ♥
The Story begin, when Bella has to move to the rainy Forks to live with her dad. She is miserable about it, but she thinks it is the best, after her mother married again. At her new school she quickly found friends. When Bella is seated next to Edward Cullen in class on her first day of school, Edward her. He disappears for a few days, but warms up to Bella and they get friends. But then Bella is nearly crushed by Tyler's van. Edward saves Bella when he instantaneously appears next to her and stops the van with his hands. Bella becomes determined to discover how Edward saved her life. After a family friend, Jacob Black, tells her the local tribal legends, Bella concludes that Edward and his family are vampires who drink animal blood. Bella is saved by Edward again in Port Angeles when she is almost attacked. He then takes Bella to dinner and then on the drive home she tells him a theory that he is a vampire. Edward confesses that he initially avoided Bella because the scent of her blood was too desirable to him. Over time, Edward and Bella fall in love. As Edward, his family and Bella play Baseball outside, three other vampires come and smell Bellas blood. Edward saves her before the vampires can bite her but one of the vampires James, a tracker, wants to hunt bella just for Fun. The Cullens send Bella to hide in a Hitel in Phoenix. Later Bella gets a call from James. He tells her that he kidnapped her mother. Bella leaves without saying something to anyone to her old ballettstudio because she thinks to find her mother there. As she notices that its a trap, it's already too late. James broke her leg and bit her. But Edward and the other Cullens rescues her. He had to suck all the poison out of her, through biting her aswell- James got killed.
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Sorry, Dein Text ethält SEHR Fehler, die man sie hier wirklich nicht alle korrigieren kann. Hier mal einige der notwendigen Korrekturen:
The story begins when Bella has to...
She feels miserable about that...
she quickly finds friends
Edward .... (???) her?
KOMMA nach "van", nicht PUNKT.
When Edward.... play..
.. without saying anything...
that it is a trap
ballet school
she hopes to find her mother
WHEN she notices...
rescue her
Und schau' Dir Deinen letzten Satz mal besonders sorgfältig an...
Ich hab's nur überflogen, aber soweit finde ich das Okay (: Nur würde ich wenn du das erste Mal Bellas Namen erwähnst, auch ihren Nachnamen sagen ;)