Wie kann ich meine englisch Präsentation verbessern?
Hi diese englisch Präsentation ist für den 1 teil meiner mündlichen Prüfung und ich habe das Gefühl das die Struktur schrecklich ist, kann mir jemand helfen?
Das ist die Präsentation wie sie jetzt ist:
Hi my name is xy and today I will present to you the Job of a dentist.
A dentist is responsible for anything regarding the health of the mouth, including teeth, gums and dental issues.They need to be licensed to perform their duties.
Dentists can be general practitioners or specialized in specific areas (e.g. pediatric dentistry, endodontists or periodontist dentistry). In this case they'll need to develop specific dentist skills. Often they are required to complete additional studies.
Some general dentist duties include conducting oral screenings to idendiseases and infections, removing tooth decay and plaque. They also need to apply prosthetics,sealers and whiteners.
A dentists responsibility is to have experience in this department more specifically experience with dental equipment and tools, surgeries and teeth extractions. Dentists should have a pleasant and compassionate personality with the ability to make patients feel comfortable. Some qualities they should have are attention to detail and the ability to remain calm under pressure.
To become a dentist you need to have the license "doctor of dental surgery (DDS)", "doctor of medicine in dentistry (DMD)" or a similar degree that gives license to practice the dentist profession.
I choose this Job because I used to have braces for about three years and therefore had regular check ups and appointments with both my orthodontics and my dentist. Because of that my interest in this department grew a lot and I decided to present this job to you.
What fascinated me is the unique skill associated with dentistry. The job provides you with the opportunity to learn to learn how to manipulate various drills, instruments and materials to physically create the desired product weather its an extraction or a crown, there is a specific and unique technique and skill required for each procedure and I find that very interesting and unique.
Most people I've met hate going to the dentist but I personally really love it because of the great interactions I have with my dentist and how they educate me about me about the importance of dental hygiene.
I'd like to thank you for you attention and let me know if there are any questions.
Ich brauche das ganz schnell weil ich mir EXTREM unsicher bin ob ich das so vortragen kann.
Danke!!!!!
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Da musst du echt noch was dran verbessern... Ich gebe dir einfach Mal kurz paar Tipps: Einleitung - hello and Welcome to my Presentation about the really interesting Job "Dentist"...... Struktur - firstly, i would like to show you my Structure, which i've Chosen for my Presentation...... Schluss - so yeah, this was my Presentation. Thank you all for listening, i hope you enjoyed my it. Do you have any questions?..... Mehr kann ich jetzt nicht machen, aber einige Sätze sind falsch strukturiert und ein paar falsche Vokabeln gibt es. Schick das einfach an jemanden auf fiverr und lass den für 5€ drüber gucken.
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Hello my name is xy and today I will you present the job, of a dentist.
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