Kann da mal jemand drüberschauen und den Text grammatikalisch verbessern? vllt hat der ein oder andere auch tipps für den ausdruck...;-) danke
My name is Christina and I am 14 years old. My presentation is about my favourite hobbies and my personal interests. In my free time I like to cycle. Sometimes, my boyfriend and I ride 30 or up to 80 kilometers. Also, I am interested in other sports, like jogging, swimming or badminton. Another hobby is travelling through interesting countries. I have been in Spain for four times, two times in Italy and made an exchange of students in France. I adore the beaches and the weather in these countries, but also the pupils and the atmosphere. Day trips to Hamburg, Köln or to the coast are a balance for school and everyday life. I am often listening to rock-music, for example to bands like “Mando Diao”, “The Hives” or Kings of Leon”. A few years ago, I visited different festivals, such as “Omas Teich”, “Highfield” or concerts of the band “Mando Diao”, “Deichkind” and “The Red Hot Chili Peppers”. My favourite hobby is football. I am playing football since 2004 in our sport club of my home village. Once we won the championship in 2010. Since that summer we play in the “Kreisliga” of Leer. We are practicing two days a week in the evening and Saturdays we run against another club. My favourite football team is the “Hamburger SV”, which only reached the 16. position in the first league. Because of this, they have to play two special matches against the third team of the second league. The winner of the match can play in the first league for the next season. I visit a match of my favourite football team, often. Than my friends and I drive to Hamburg by train for supporting our team. In this summer, the World Cup starts. I will watch every match of the German team, but I do not believe, that Germany will get the world champion this year, because they disappointed me in the matches before. What do you think?
