Kann sich jemand eine Melodie zu meinen Lyrics vorstellen?

Ich habe bis jetzt viele Melodien versucht, doch alle scheiterten an unterschiedlichen Versen, wo der Rhythmus nicht mit der Melodie übereinstimmen wollte. Daher hab ich bis jetzt keine der Melodien fertiggestellt. (zudem klingen alle wie ein Ausschnitt aus einem Musical, ich hab wohl zu lange in der Oper gesungen) + Bitte keine zu hohen Erwartungen, das ist mein erster Song :)

[Intro]    

No thousand twelvemonths are enough

To silence the roaring skies above

[Verse 1]

You looked into the falling stars

Wishing to catch one as it falls

The woods and rivers shrouded in black 

Hiding from the four-, two-, three-legged being’s attack

[Chorus]

But no thousand twelvemonths were enough 

To silence the roaring skies above 

So, man still strayed around the globe 

Never taking off the death dealer’s robe 

[Verse 2]

The creature didn’t show awareness 

Its vision blurred; own cries unheard

Reached out for truthfulness regardless

While time seeped through the hands of earth

[Chorus]

But no thousand twelvemonths were enough 

To silence the roaring skies above 

So, man still strayed around the globe 

Never taking off the death dealer’s robe 

[Verse 3]

Do you see? The stars that built your shrine

Will never fall apart like people drunk on wine

So just imagine a faraway calling dream 

While you find yourself in a violent stream 

[Chorus]

But no thousand twelvemonths were enough 

To silence the roaring skies above 

So, man still strayed around the globe 

Never taking off the death dealer’s robe 

[Outro]

But no thousand twelvemonths were enough 

To silence the roaring skies above 

So, man still strayed around the globe 

Never taking off the death dealer’s robe 

Musik, Song, Lied, Lyrics, Melodie

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