Wie findet ihr meinen selbstgeschriebenen Songtext?
Get up, I don't know how long you've been sitting here, but I know one thing for sure. It's time for you to finally get up. Don't let anyone tell you who you are! Only you know that. I know that when we argue, we don't talk to each other and we're both completely alone. But, I'll tell you one thing, everyone makes mistakes sometimes. And if some girl tells you that you're stupid. then ignore it because it's not true. Now come on, stand up, take my hand and let it all out!
Give me your hand and hold on to me, together we can achieve more. You're completely lost alone. remember that.
There were such beautiful moments, everyone stays here with us. No matter whether overnight parties, school trips, school work or punishment tasks. We did everything just the two of us. And it will stay like that. Because it's stupid to give up, to lose all courage. Come on, stand up, take my hand and hold it tight. I'll put a smile on your face. Come on, get up now and I'll hold your hand tight!
One against two, has no chance, so come here and don't let me down. Together we fight against evil. Together we are strong.
Give me your hand and hold on to me, together we can achieve more. You're completely lost alone. remember that.
There were such beautiful moments, everyone stays here with us. No matter whether overnight parties, school trips, school work or punishment tasks. We did everything just the two of us. And it will stay like that. Because it's stupid to give up, to lose all courage. Come on, stand up, take my hand and hold it tight. I'll put a smile on your face. Come on, get up now and I'll hold your hand tight!
Go through thick and thin together. When you're on thin ice, you don't let yourself down. But it helps. Hand in hand over the thin ice, then it becomes thick and doesn't break!
Give me your hand and hold on to me, together we can achieve more. You're completely lost alone. remember that.
There were such beautiful moments, everyone stays here with us. No matter whether overnight parties, school trips, school work or punishment tasks. We did everything just the two of us. And it will stay like that. Because it's stupid to give up, to lose all courage. Come on, stand up, take my hand and hold it tight. I'll put a smile on your face. Come on, get up now and I'll hold your hand tight!
Well, finally a smile on your face. I promise you, I won't leave you!
Wie findet ihr den Text? Selbst geschrieben. Bin 12 🥰
3 Antworten
Wenn du wirklich erst 12 bist, ist das natürlich eine tolle Leistung. Mein Kompliment! 👍👍👍
Allerdings würde er mich vor eine Herausforderung stellen, wenn ich ihn vertonen sollte. Hattest du beim Schreiben schon eine Melodie im Kopf, der der Text folgt? Oder suchst du jetzt nach einer passenden Melodie dafür?
Wenn du selbst kein Instrument spielst, ist es natürlich schwierig. Vielleicht kennst du aber jemanden, der eins spielt und dir dabei helfen kann.
Ja ist ein schöner Songtext, hat aber zu viele Wörter. 50% der Wörter müssen raus, sonst ist es ein Rapsong.
Inhaltlich schön, musikalisch schwer umzusetzen
Ich habe schon eine Melodie, aber weiß nicht wie ich es umsetzten soll 😅