Match Report

Hallo. Ich hab am Dienstag eine Englisch Arbeit, in der ich einen Match Repot schreiben muss. Ich wollte euch einfach nach meinungen für meinen Report bitten: The match report At the 19th October, on Sunday, was the first match of the year. Bristol South against Redcliffe. The match was at Redcliffe's ground. The first half began slowly and finished 0-0. The secound half was faster than the first half. Redcliffe made lots of mistakes, because of that it was just a question of time, till Bristol South shot a goal. Finally Bristol South's best player, Tim Hooley, scored the goal and the final score was Bristol South 1 and Redcliffe 0.
Danke schonmal

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

Auf die Schnelle:

(---) Match report

(---) 19th October, on Sunday, - Word Order

hier fehlt das kleine Wörtchen there was the first match of the year**, Bristol South against Redcliffe. The match **was (Wiederholung; suche nach Alternativen

at Redcliffe's ground. The first half began slowly and finished 0-0. The secound half was faster than the first half. Redcliffe made lots of mistakes**, (kein Komma) because of that** it was just a question of time kein Komma, till Bristol South shot a goal. Finally Komma Bristol South's best player, Tim Hooley, scored the goal and the final score was Bristol South 1 and Redcliffe 0.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

PS: http://www.keelbyunited.co.uk/blog/management/writing_match_reports.html