Wir sollen einen kurzen Bericht über die ferien in New York schreiben und ich wollte wissen ob mein Bericht okay ist.

In my last holidays my family and I were in New York. First we went to our hotel and slept 8 hours. Then we ate Bagels at ,,Deli". Subsequently we visited to Central Park. There we saw the Statue of Liberty. I had forgot my camera in the hotel and I don't take photos. Later we were on the empire state building. The empire state building is very high. At the night we went to the time square and everything was bling bling. We saw many big screens. It was my best holidays in my life.