Englisch Bildbeschreibung ist das so ok 2??

The cartoon by Phil published on the internet website summener.org with the caption "" deals with the Brexit under the leadership of Borris Johnssen.

In the centre of the cartoon is a big ship with the inscription "Great Britain", that is crashing into a big ice rock with the inscription "EU" and the stars of the eu flag on it.

Moreover, the ship and ice rock are surrounded by water in the bottom of the cartoon.

Also there is a man with blond hair, that is wearing a suit on the top of the ship. He is saying throught a speech bubble "Ich bin...". The speeh bubble is on the top left corner of the cartoon. Furthermore the ship has cracks on the spots that are hitting the ice rock. So of course the ship is sinking .

His body language and face expression shows, that he is insane and crazy. Moreover, throught the details that the man has like the blond hair and originally face erverybody can see that the man stands for Borris Johnnnes.

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3 Antworten

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Lernen, Sprache

22.02.2020, 18:29

Hallo,

schade, dass du die Fehler aus deiner letzten Bildbeschreibung nicht korrigiert hast.

The cartoon by Phil published on the internet website summener.org with (Präposition) the caption "" deals with the Brexit under the leadership of Borris Johnssen. (Den Namen solltest du aber richtig schreiben können!)

In the centre of the cartoon (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is a big ship with the inscription "Great Britain" (Vor that steht im Englischen kein Komma!) that is crashing into a big ice rock with the inscription "EU" and the stars of the eu (RS) flag on it.

Moreover, the ship and ice rock are surrounded by water in (Präposition) the bottom of the cartoon.

Also there is (Satzstellung) a man with blond hair (kein Komma, s. o.) that is wearing a suit on the top of the ship (besser an den Satzanfang). He is saying throught (RS) a speech bubble (Formulierung, man spricht nicht durch eine Sprechblase.) "Ich bin...". The speeh bubble is on (Präposition) the top left corner of the cartoon. Furthermore (Komma) the ship has cracks on the spots that are (Formulierung) hitting the ice rock (Wort). So of course the ship is sinking .

His (Wessen?) body language and face expression shows (Grammatik) (kein Komma, s. o.) that he is insane and crazy. Moreover, throught (RS, Präposition) the details that the man has (Formulierung) (Komma) like the blond hair and originally (Wortart) face (Komma) erverybody (RS) can see that the man stands for Borris Johnnnes (s.o.).

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

Tipps und Wendungen zu englischen Bildbeschreibungen findest du unter folgenden Links:

- ego4u.de/de/cram-up/writing/picture-description

- fosbosenglisch.de/new/

- englisch-hilfen.de/en/words/describing_pictures.htm

:-) AstridDerPu

skechrono

Beitragsersteller

22.02.2020, 18:49

The cartoon by Phil published on the internet website summener.org with (Präposition) the caption "" deals with the Brexit under the leadership of Boris Johnson.

In the centre of the cartoon (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is a big ship with the inscription "Great Britain" that is crashing into a big ice rock with the inscription "EU" and the stars of the EU flag on it.

Moreover, the ship and ice rock are surrounded by water in (Präposition) the bottom of the cartoon. On the top of the ship is a man with blond hair that is wearing a suit. The speech bubble of the man says "Ich bin...". The speeh bubble is on (Präposition) the top left corner of the cartoon. Furthermore, the ship has cracks on the spots that are (Formulierung) hitting the ice rock (Wort). So of course the ship is sinking .

Body language and face expression of the man shows (Grammatik) that he is insane and crazy. Moreover, throught (RS, Präposition) the details that the man has (Formulierung) (Komma) like the blond hair and (Wortart) face, everybody can see that the man stands for Boris Johnson.

Kannst du mir mal sagen was du mit Präpositionen meinst?

Außerdem was ist daran falsch ? Through the details that the man has, for example...

Und welches Wort fehlt denn?

Danke für die Antwort !!!

hallihallo422

22.02.2020, 17:51

das ist super aber du solltest an der einen stelle wo du sagst dass der mann auf dem boot steht noch sagen auf welchem der beiden. ansonsten gut :)

fanclub75

22.02.2020, 17:54

ist verständlich, aber ggf. noch 2 anmerkungen:

big ship named "great britainic"

und baue irgendwo den vergleich mit der titanic ein.

und der blonde boris heißt etwas anders

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