Hey, kann mir jemand bitte in englisch weiterhelfen?

Ich brauche Hilfe bei einer Bildbeschreibung, könnt ihr eventuell mein Text besser umschreiben/mich verbessern?

ich danke euch!

Bild zum Beitrag

The cartoon shows an meadow with a sky an clouds. in the back left corner of the cartoon is a bush and on the back right corner are three bushes. between the bushes is a shower where a naked man is standing and showering. Towards the middle of the cartoon you can also see that the water of the shower flows down in the direction of a sewert. In the front of the picture you can see a man lying eyes closed on earth with many stones, two skulls and a broken vase on it, his clothes are dirty and torn the man extends his hand forward in the direction of the water.

3 Antworten

911TurboS

18.05.2020, 18:55

Sollt ihr nicht erklären was der Sinn dahinter ist?

ErsterSchnee

18.05.2020, 18:57

Meistens nicht. Wenn man nur eine Bildbeschreibung machen soll, geht es tatsächlich nur darum, was da zu sehen ist - nicht um die Bedeutung. Deshalb ist es auch so wichtig, wo die Büsche stehen...

Wundert mich bei meinen Kindern auch jedes Mal aufs Neue - scheint aber tatsächlich so gewollt zu sein...

Klarisa666

Beitragsersteller

18.05.2020, 18:57

Ja muss ich, da war der erste Part. Gibt noch nen zweiten und einen dritten.

MonkeyKing

18.05.2020, 19:02

Von der Bewertung her müsste man noch wissen welche Klasse es ist. Aber grundsäzlich finde ich die Beschreibung gelungen, habe aber trotzdem Vorschläge:

Einmal sind da Rechtschreibfehler drin, besonders auch Groß- und Kleinschreibung (auch im Englischen schreibt man den ersten Buchstaben eines Satzes groß) aber auch manche Worte sind falsch geschrieben (sewert).

Inhaltlich würde ich den Fokus noch mehr auf die wichtigen Details setzten, also die Büsche brauchst du nicht zu beschreiben, du solltest aber noch erwähnen dass die Erde sehr trocken ist (man könnte "scorched earth" schreiben) und wie hier schon jemand erwähnt hat dass der duschende Mann ein Weißer ist und der Liegende ein Schwarzer.

Klarisa666

Beitragsersteller

18.05.2020, 19:06

Danke dir :)

ErsterSchnee

18.05.2020, 18:55

Ist ein wenig kurz. Vielleicht solltest du noch betonen, dass der WEISSE Mann duscht, während der SCHWARZE Mann verdurstet.

Klarisa666

Beitragsersteller

18.05.2020, 18:58

war der erste Part haha

ErsterSchnee

18.05.2020, 18:58

@Klarisa666

Ändert ja aber nichts an meiner Antwort...

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