Vortrag in Englisch über The Vampire Diaries?
hey, ich habe gerade einen Text geschrieben, ich werde am Freitag diesen so vorlesen und würde deswegen gerne wissen, ob dieser okay ist... (ich habe jetzt nicht arg auf Kommasetzung sowie Groß und Kleinschreibung geachtet, hoffe das ist okay!)
Hello, now I want to talk about my favorite show too, The Vampire Diaries, which is available on Netflix or Amazon Prime. In the past, the show came on Pro Sieben too, but not anymore. This drama television series by Kelvin Williamson and Julie plec is based on the book “the vampire diaries” by L. Smith.
The protagonists of the show are Nina Dobrev as Elena Gilbert, Paul Wesley as Stefan Salvatore and Ian Sommerhalder as Damon Salvatore. Elena and her younger brother Jeremy lost their parents by a car accident a few months ago. Elena survived the accident but her parents died. in the new school year, after the summer holidays, Elena has her the first school day, she hopes everything going to be better.
Elena meets the new student Stefan Salvatore on her first school day. she fell in love with him but there is something she doesn't know, Stefan is a vampire and so he is over 100 years old. He and Elena start a relationship but she doesn't know anything about his secret and his past.
some strange things happen in Mystic Falls the place Elena, her friends and Stefan live. a lot of people get attacked and die because of too little blood in their bodies. Doctors and reports sell these outbreaks as attacks from dangerous animals, but later they realize that the vampires are back in Mystic Falls, terrorizing the city.
Stefan doesn't kill anybody so he wants to find out who is killing all the humans and after his search, he meets his older brother Damon who is really angry about him. Damon doesn't leave Mystic Falls, so Stefan’s and Elena's life change hardly, especially, when Damon starts to fell in love, with his brothers girlfriend. The story repeats, Damon and Stefan fall in love in the past, with a girl, named Katherine. Both want to win over Katherine, but she love the both an can‘t pick one.
I hope I was able to give you a little insight into the series, but I do not want to go into more detail now to avoid spoiling or confusing you. Thank you, for your attention.
Danke für eure Hilfe!
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Hallo,
die Textmenge sprengt hier wirklich den Rahmen. Deshalb von mir nur das Gröbste.
Hello,
now (RS) I want to (Kinder, die was wollen, kriegen was auf die Bollen.) talk about my favorite (= AE; BE = favourite) show (---), The Vampire Diaries, which is available on Netflix or Amazon Prime. In the past, the show came (Wort) on Pro Sieben too, but not anymore (non-standard English). This drama television series by Kelvin Williamson and Julie plec (RS) is based on the book “the vampire diaries” by L. Smith.
The protagonists of the show are Nina Dobrev as Elena Gilbert, Paul Wesley as Stefan Salvatore and Ian Sommerhalder as Damon Salvatore. Elena and her younger brother Jeremy lost their parents by (Wort) a car accident a few months ago. Elena survived the accident but her parents died. in (RS) the new school year (kein Komma) after the summer holidays, Elena has her (---) first school day, she hopes everything going (Grammatik) to be better.
Elena meets the new student Stefan Salvatore on her first school day (Besser an den Satzanfang.). she (RS) fell (Grammatik) in love with him but there is something she doesn't know, (neuer Satz) Stefan is a vampire and so he is over 100 years old. He and Elena start a relationship but she doesn't know anything about his secret and his past.
some (RS) strange things happen in Mystic Falls (Komma) the place Elena, her friends and Stefan live. a (RS) lot of people get (besser: be-passive) attacked and die because of too little blood in their bodies. Doctors and reports (Wort) sell these outbreaks as attacks from dangerous animals, but later they realize that the vampires are back in Mystic Falls (kein Komma) terrorizing the city.
Stefan doesn't kill anybody so (Wort) he wants to find out who is killing (Grammatik) all the humans and after his search, he meets his older brother Damon (Komma) who is really angry about him. Damon doesn't leave Mystic Falls, so (Wort) Stefan’s and Elena's life change (Grammatik) hardly (Position), especially, when Damon starts to fell (Grammatik) in love (kein Komma) with his brothers (Grammatik) girlfriend. The story repeats (Grammatik), Damon and Stefan fall (Grammatik) in love in the past (kein Komma) with a girl (kein Komma) named Katherine. Both want (Grammatik) to win over Katherine, but she love (Grammatik) the both an (RS) can‘t pick one (Hier fehlt etwas.).
I hope I was able to give you a little insight into the series, but I do not want to go into more (Wort) detail now to avoid spoiling (Hier fehlt etwas.) or confusing you. Thank you (kein Komma) for your attention.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
Sorry, wollte auf hilfreich klicken... vielen dank!