American dream outlining?
Hallo,
ist mein Outlining gut geworden, ich muss es meiner Lehrerin abschicken ?
In 1931, James T. Adams coined the idea of the American Dream. In the following, I will introduce the main aspects:
At first, Adams mentions that the idea of the American Dream increased because of the encounter of the Europeans
and expectations of America in order to lead a life in freedom. Moreover, there is the imagination of a rich in
nature and religous influenced country.
As Adam says, the American dream is about to have unlimited access to be successful and that Americans are the chosen ones to spread democracy·
Additionally, the frontier movement is a possibility for immigrants.
Furthermore, liberty and equality are the aims of an American Dream. The fusion in to a nation is part of the dream in the hope of to impede to neglect someone
At the end, Adams clarifies that at the one hand the faith on the American Dream is still existing and at the other hand it is vanished and not necessary anymore.
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Hallo,
In 1931, James T. Adams coined the idea of the American Dream. In the following, I will introduce the main aspects:
(---) First, Adams mentions that the idea of the American Dream increased (Wort) because of the encounter of the Europeans (Was soll das heißen?)
and expectations of America in order to lead a life in freedom. (Was soll das heißen?)
Moreover, there is the imagination of a rich (Wort) in
nature and religous influenced (Grammatik) country. - Dieser Abschnitt ist unverständlich.
As Adam says, the American dream is about to have (Formulierung, Grammatik) unlimited access to be successful (Formulierung) and that Americans are the chosen ones to spread democracy.
Additionally, the frontier movement (???) is a possibility for immigrants.
Furthermore, liberty and equality are the aims of an (Wort, Grammtik) American Dream. The fusion in to a (Wort) nation is part of the dream in the hope of to impede to neglect someone (Formulierung) - Dieser Abschnitt ist unverständlich.
At the end, Adams clarifies that at (Wort) the one hand (---) faith on (Wort) the American Dream is still existing and at (Wort) the other hand it is vanished (Grammatik) and not necessary anymore.
- Bitte American Dream als Eigenname durchgängig großschreiben.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert, das Kursivgedruckte überdacht werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
Nein, das kannst du so nicht abschicken. Es enthält viel zu viele Fehler und ist größtenteils unverständlich.
:-) AstridDerPu