Hallo, wir hatten in Englisch eine Aufgabe, undzwar mussten wir eine situation hörem (CD), wir sollten uns Stichpunkte dazu machen und dann zu Hause eine Art Zeitungsartikel oder Interview schreiben. Könntet ihr mir verbesserungs Vorschläge geben und verbessern? Wäre echt hilfreich, Sternchen wird natürlich auch vergeben!*
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I drove by car, suddenly i saw a girl and a bike on the road, i stopped to look up the girl.
I asked her what happened, she answered that she was driving by bike and than there was suddenly a dog in front of her, so she lost control and crashed. She told me that her left arm and her right knee hurts,but first i checked her head - her head was ok. Then i looked after her left arm, she cried because it hurts so much. I told her that her arm is probably broken and that I'm a doctor but she has to went to a hospital with her parents.