Tipps für ein personal statement in der Englischarbeit?

Hallo, ich schreibe in ein paar Tagen eine Englischarbeit zum Thema Bewerbungen, heißt wir müssen ein CV und einen official letter schreiben. Wir werden uns warscheinlich für ein Auslandsjahr in einem englischsprachigen Land bewerben müssen. Ich bin jetzt dabei ein CV für ein Auslandsjahr zu schreiben, habe aber Schwierigkeiten mit dem personal statement:/ Daher hätte ich gerne ein paar Tipps was man so Besonderes in ein p.s. schreiben sodass es nicht so abgedroschen klingt wie: "I very like the english language and it is one of my favourite subjects at school and I am quite good. However I want to improve my engish skills. A school jear abroad will be also a valiuable experience, I will get more independent, and meet new people."....außerdem würde ich gerne wissen wie lang soein official letter sein sollte...Vielen Dank schonmal im Vorraus für alle hilfreichen Antworten:)

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AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

11.01.2014, 17:26

I very like the english language and it is one of my favourite subjects at school and I am quite good (Hier fehlt etwas.). However Komma I want to (besser: would like to) improve my engish skills. A school jear abroad will be also (Position) a valiuable experience, I will get more independent kein Komma and meet new people.

Gut in Englisch nenne ich anders.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

xKatara

11.01.2014, 17:16

hier paar phrasen ^^ http://de.bab.la/phrasen/bewerbung/anschreiben/deutsch-englisch/

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