englische bewerbung für klassenarbeit klasse 9?

Hallo miteinander İch schreibe am Donnerstag eine Klassenarbeit und wir sollen auf englisch eine Bewerbung schreiben. Ist das den korrekt so weit? Gramatikalisch und ob die zeit stimmt.

Dear mr/ mrs

I'm writting to apply for a work experience placement at your firm next summer. I read your advertisment in the newspaper last week.

I am 16 years old and I have a good level of English but would like to improve my spraking kills. Currently I attend the 9th grade of a secondary school and when I leave school I plan to study ...

I'm a hard-working friendly and a fast learner. I have also worked in a sports shop so I have experience in serving people and working in a team. Please find my CV with this letter. Yours sincerely

1 Antwort

Caila

06.02.2017, 17:07

spraking kills?
good level of englisch?
Dear Mr/ Mrs?
hard-working firendly?
Yours sincerly?

Also kein englisch-sprachiger Arbeitgeber würde dich einstellen mit dieser Bewerbung. Du solltest das nochmal überarbeiten.

Dya2812

Beitragsersteller

06.02.2017, 17:18

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