bitte hilfe bei bewerbung auf englisch!
ich schreibe bald ne englischarbeit über praktikum, bewerbung schrieben usw.. hab mal ne bewerbung geschrieben, wäre echt nett wenn ihr mir sagen könntet ob ich was falsch geamcht habe..danke schonmal :)))
Application for a work experience placement in summer 2012
Dear Mr ....
I am writing to apply for a work experience placement with your firm next summer. I read your advertisement in the newspaper last week.
Currently I attend the 9th grade of a Gymnasium and when i leave school i plan to study social pedagogy. As you will see from the enclosed CV, i already hab a placement for a work experiece in a kindergarden last summer, so i have some knowlede of educating and helping at problems yet. Besides my side job is babysitting, which goes in this direction, too. This placement would give me the opportunity to extend my knowledge of working with kids. Should you require further information about my qualifications i wouls be pleased to quote references.
I hope very much that you are able to offer me a placement. I would be very motivated to help you and i would do my best to help you. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely .....
Encl. CV
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at your firm
hab=had
Beside that..
which goes in that direction ...ist deutsch... besser: which is near that profession
at working with
Ansonsten ganz gut für geschätzte 8-10 Klasse...
ja 9. klasse :)
hab war ein tippfehler :D
dankeschön :))
Erste zwei Sätze ersatzlos streichen. Mehr von konkreten Erfahrungen in deinem bisherigen Arbeitsleben berichten.
meine englischlehrerin meinte die sätze müssen da hin die hab ich ausm buch :D
Du hast vergessen, dass es auch Frauen in Personalbüros gibt. I schreibt man groß. so i have some knowlede of educating and helping at problems yet...muss da ein yet hin. Ich kenn yet nur nach Verneinungen, wie I haven't done sth yet. Vergiss in der Arbeit das Datum nicht.
when i will leave school i will plan study social pedagogogy.. ist ja in deer zukuft
i had already a placement in a.....
i had some knowledge.... yet ist ein signalwort
und noch schreiben für welche firma de dich bewirbst :D
sonst ist es gut wir haben auch letzens geschrieben..., konnten und aber nicht selber was ausdenken soindern mussten uns von berufen einen aussuchen :D
viel glück in der arbeit lg mili
echt ? oh man wie scheiße ich wollte den auswendig lernen hahah :D
dankeschön:))
Application for work experience placement.
Dear Mr....
I read your advertisement in the newspaper last week. I would be most grateful if you would consider my application for a work experience placement with your company next summer.
Currently I attend the 9th grade of a Gymnasium and when I leave school I plan to study social pedagogy. Last Summer I had a work experience placement in a (nursery) Where I gained experience and knowledge of educating children. I also regularly babysit for for a 3 year old boy/girl. This placement would give me the opportunity to extend my knowledge of working with children. I am very motivated, hard working and caring. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you. Please find enclosed my CV and references. Should you require further information please do not hesitate to contact me.
be more specific babysit for for a 3 year old boy/girl.( personal contact make it sound like you have a special bond with the children you look after)
i would be pleased to quote references.(don't make them do extra work. If the are worth having , send them)
As you will see from the enclosed CV( yes they will see from your CV. Don't state the obvious.
firm = company is a better word.
Kids= children is a better word.
kindergarten= nursery is much more common in UK. (Kindergarten passt auch)