Nelson Mandela Referat auf englisch
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Good afternoon Mrs Kimmerle and Mrs Kinzer, today im gonna tell you something about Nelson Mandela. Nelson Rolihahla Mandela was born in Mvezo in South Africa on 18 July 1918. He is one of the most greatest human rights activitis. For his decade-long fight against Apartheid, for which he was under arrest as a political prisoner for 27 years. With his staying power an fighting spirit he set of a political change in South Africa. His determination motivated the people to protest and stand up for their rights, so the opression of the black people in South Africa came to an end. From 1994 until 1999 he was the first democratically elected State President of South Africa and respected as an idol. He was also awarded the Nobel Prize for Freedom for his actions in 1993. Before his presidency, he was a prominent anti-apartheid activist who was involved in the planning of underground-armed resistance activities.As a young student,he became involved in political opposition to the white minority government, espescially in its denial of political,social and economic rights to South Africas black majority.He also study law. He joined the African National Congress (ANC) in 1942 and later its more dynamic youth league.The armed activism was, for Mandela, a last resort; before a certain point he used to be a follower of the non-violent resistance.The point when he decided that violence was neccessary in his fight against Apartheid was when unarmed Demonstrates were shot in the Sharpeville-Massacre and the ANC and other Anti-Apartheid Groups were forbidden in 1960.n 1961, Mandela became the leader of the armed wing of the ANC, the so called “Spear of the Nation”. He coordinated a sabotage campaign against military and government targets, and made plans for a possible guerrilla war if sabotage failed to end apartheid. Nelson wedded three times. From the first two marriages he has got six childiren. He divorced from his first wife at 1957 from his second wife at 1996. On his 80 Birthday he married the widow Graca Machel, who was once married with Samora Machel the former president of Mozambique and supporter of ANC. He lost two sons. The first one died because of a car accident and the second one had got Aids.
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gibt eigentlich nichts auszusetzen, gut geschrieben. Vielleicht noch ein paar Kommas mehr einsetzen ;)
Good afternoon Mrs Kimmerle and Mrs Kinzer,
today im
gonna tell you something about Nelson Mandela. Nelson Rolihahla Mandela was born in Mvezo in South Africa on 18 July 1918. He is (Zeit) one of the (---) greatest human rights activitis (RS).
For his decade-long fight against Apartheid, for which he was under arrest as a political prisoner for 27 years. - (kein vollständiger Satz)
With his staying power an (RS) fighting spirit Komma he set ofa political change in South Africa. His determination motivated the people to protest and stand up for their rights, so the opression of the black people in South Africa came to an end. From 1994 until 1999 Komma he was the first democratically elected State President of South Africa and respected as an idol. He was also awarded the Nobel Prize for Freedom for his actions in 1993. Before his presidency, he was a prominent anti-apartheid activist who was involved in the planning of underground-armed resistance activities.As a young student, he became involved in political opposition to the white minority government, espescially in its denial of political, social and economic rights to South Africas black majority. He also study (Zeit) law. He joined the African National Congress (ANC) in 1942 and later Hier fehlt eine Präposition. its more dynamic youth league.The armed activism was, for Mandela, a last resort; before a certain point he used to be a follower of the non-violent resistance.The point when he decided that violence was neccessary in his fight against Apartheid was when unarmed Demonstrates were shot in the Sharpeville-Massacre and the ANC and other Anti-Apartheid Groups were forbidden in 1960.
n 1961, Mandela became the leader of the armed wing of the ANC, the so called “Spear of the Nation”. He coordinated a sabotage campaign against military and government targets, and made plans for a possible guerrilla war if sabotage failed to end apartheid. Nelson wedded three times. From the first two marriages he has got six childiren (RS). He divorced from his first wife at 1957 Komma from his second wife at 1996. On his 80 Birthday he married the widow Graca Machel, who was (Zeit) once married with Samora Machel Komma the former president of Mozambique and supporter of Hier fehtl der Artikel. ANC. He lost two sons. The first one died because of a car accident and the second one had got Aids.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
AstridDerPu
Good afternoon Mrs Kimmerle and Mrs Kinzer,
Today I am going to tell you something about Nelson Mandela. Nelson Rolihahla Mandela was born in Mvezo in South Africa on the 18th of July in 1918 (Todesdatum fehlt). He was one of the greatest human rights activists of all time. He fought against Apartheid for decades, for which he was under arrest as a political prisoner for 27 years. With his staying power and his fighting spirit he set off a political change in South Africa. His determination motivated the people to protest and stand up for their rights, so the opression of the black people in South Africa came to an end. From 1994 until 1999, he was the first democratically elected State President of South Africa and respected as an idol. He was also awarded the Nobel Prize for Freedom for his actions in 1993.
Before his presidency, he was a prominent anti-apartheid activist who was involved in the planning of underground-armed resistance activities. As a young student, he became involved in political opposition to the white minority government, especially in its denial of political, social and economic rights to South Africas black majority. He also studied law. He joined the African National Congress (ANC) in 1942 and later its more dynamic youth league. The armed activism was a last resort for Mandela; before a certain point he used to be a follower of the non-violent resistance. The point when he decided that violence was necessary in his fight against Apartheid was when unarmed demonstrates were shot in the Sharpeville-Massacre and the ANC and other Anti-Apartheid Groups were forbidden in 1960. In 1961, Mandela became the leader of the armed wing of the ANC, the so called “Spear of the Nation”. He coordinated a sabotage campaign against military and government targets, and made plans for a possible guerrilla war if sabotage failed to end apartheid.
Nelson got married three times. From the first two marriages he has got six childiren. He divorced from his first wife in 1957 and from his second wife in 1996. On his 80th Birthday, he married the widow Graca Machel, who was once married with Samora Machel the former president of Mozambique and supporter of ANC. He lost two sons. The first one died because of a car accident and the second died of Aids.
Hab noch ein paar Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler korrigiert, im Großen und Ganzen ist der Text aber gut. :P
danke. was kann ich da noch dazu schreiben?