Ist diese Email gut auf englisch?
Ich muss in der Schule eine Email über London schreiben ich wollte fragen ob das so okay ist ?!
Dear..., My family and I are for 7 days in London. We did lots of things in the last 3 days: We visited Buckingham Palace ,the London Eye and St. Pauls Cathedral. In Buckingham Palace ,I saw the queen. that was very amazing. From the London Eye, you have a good view from all over London.St.Pauls Cathedral you can see too. Now we are in a Bangladeshi restaurant. There are very spicy dishes. I take a medium spicy dish.Today we want to go to the Leicester Square. Tomorrow, we are going to go to the Tower of London, there are the crown juwels.The next day we are going to go to the British Museum, which is free!! There are a lot of mummies too.So far I liked the London Eye most. Yours ......
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My family and myself are currently in London for 7 days. We did lots of things (Anm: umgangsprachlich. Formaler wäre "a lot of things"). We visited Buckingham Palace ,the London Eye and St. Pauls Cathedral. I saw the queen in Buckingham Palace, that was very amazing. From the London Eye you have a good view from all over London. You can see St.Pauls Cathedral. Now we are in a Bangladeshi restaurant.
My Family and i are in London for 7 days. Sonst 👍🏼
Gleich zwei Fehler in einem Satz ...
Und auch dein "sonst ..." ist nicht in Ordnung.
Ohhh entschuldige ( Sarkasmus )
Ich glaube der der die Frage gestellt hat , hat verstanden was ich meine .😒