Schreibe eine Englisch Arbeit über Email/Letter of complaint und bräuchte Korrektur bzw. Notenvorschlag oder Tipps?
Angabe:
You recently ordered a computer game form the American company Game of Games but the delivered purcharse only includes a Spanish version of the game. Write a formal letter on oder to complain about this unfortunate mistake.
Text:
To: compony@gameofgame.com
from:ben.sch@gmx.at
subject: The wrong delivery
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in order to complain about a purchase I have recently made. My name is Ben Geyer and I live in Austria.
One week ago I bought your new computer game “heart on heart” via Amazon. I had to wait very long for the package and so I was really hyped when I opened the game and put it into my play station. But when I started the game I realised that it is not my language. You probably sent me the Spanish version. I checked the language three times before I bought ordered the game. I did not to want anything get wrong, so I also called the support if the game is really my language. These assured me that it is in English. But no it is not.
I think you can image in which situation I am now. I looked forward to the game for days and now I do not understand everything. This is an unbearable situation for me and therefore my suggestion would be that you entitle me to some form of compensation.
I would be grateful if you could exchange my product, or refund my money. If you need my bank account or something other data you could write me when ever you want.
I hope we will find a way to solve the problem so I will not be forced to take further action because I did not have any struggles with your company since yet.
I would be grateful if you contact me at ben.sch@gmx.at as quickly as possible if you have a solution.
Yours faithfully,
Ben Geyer
Madam,
l am writing to you in response to the article : “ I , narcissist, vanity, social media, and the human condition". I would like to comment on the quote
"It‘s almost like the photographing and sharing of a cool time is more important than actually appreciating it in real life". (Ll.83-86)
In my opinion, I totally disagree with this claim. What you need to keep in mind is that there is a correlation between sharing a cool time and appreciating it in real life. For example you are about exploring , the nature and photographing it for sharing the beautyness. It does not have to mean that you did not have fun in this moment. There is no evidence to say this in general.I see your point that the most sharing their moments to gain public attention but we have to consider the fact that we do not know if they are happy or not while doing this.
It can even be a further expression to appreciating both sides. Maybe while you are recording a famous concert, you are creating good content. This aspect can cause that you receive money so that it is a win-win situation. Especially, when we Talk about passions.
You are absolutely right When you say looking 24/7 at the phone to share and photographing things instead of concentrating of the activities, it can Not be related to the appreciation.
But it can be a sign that a person wants to Keep this event as a memory to appreciate it thousand times in lifetime so the value does Not disappear, Which stresses out my view of point
All in all, the quotation consists of bias. you can do both matters at the same time. Social media can not always be represented as a scapegoat, it depends on the human. This should be an appeal to future articels on the issue.