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San Diego is the second largest city in the U.S. state of California and the seventh largest in the United States. The city has 1.28705 million inhabitants and is located in southwestern California, near the border with Mexico. San Diego is the capital of the district, the San Diego County. Due to its pleasant climate, is called by its inhabitants, like San Diego as America's Finest City. The Pacific beaches popular with surfing enthusiasts. San Diego is more than just a surfer's paradise. The city has in recent years become one of the most important centers of telecommunications and biotechnology industries. San Diego is one of many cities in the United States. In San Diego, usually English and Spanish is spoken. Firms often work in both languages, and most companies employ bilingual employees. The third most important language in San Diego is the Tagalog. This circumstance is related to the large Filipino community in the city. Here there are many entertainment options as well as shopping trips. To date, the city is still not as well known as New York or Los Angeles, but this will change anytime soon. Every one has heard of the major attractions in San Diego. Balboa Park is the green lung of San Diego. This is where families gather for picnics, jogging or sports for older people to simply take a walk. The park offers many green spaces, water features and a few as opposed to the center of San Diego better air to breathe. Here you can relax. In the park, the famous zoo and several museums are located. Flower lovers will enjoy specially designed gardens.
Now i tell you something aboute the crime situation
San Diego is one of the safest cities in California. Of course you should still take the same precautions as in other cities of comparable size. Walks through South East San Diego or the Barrio Logan - near or even under the Coronado Bridge - at night should be avoided because these are the most dangerous neighborhoods in the city. As for the gang crime, it also exists in San Diego, but it is impossible to compare with that in Los Angeles.
Danke im Voraus! :-))))))))))))))))))
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Hallo,
hier meine Korrekturen nach einem ersten, flüchtigen Durchlesen:
San Diego is the second largest city in the U.S. state of California and the seventh largest in the United States. The city has 1.28705 million inhabitants and is located in southwestern California, near the border to Mexico. San Diego is the capital of the San Diego County district.
Due to its pleasant climate, its inhabitants call San Diego America's Finest City. The Pacific beaches are popular with surfing enthusiasts. San Diego is more than just a surfer's paradise. In recent years, the city has become one of the most important centers (= AE; centres = BE) of telecommunication and biotechnology industry.
(San Diego is one of many cities in the United States.) würde ich weglassen.
English and Spanish are the two most common languages spoken in San Diego. Firms often work in both languages, and most companies employ bilingual employees. The third most important language in San Diego is the Tagalog due to the large Filipino community in the city.
San Diego offers many entertainment options as well as shopping facilities. These days / Today, the city is still not as well known as New York or Los Angeles, but this will change anytime soon. Everyone has heard of the major attractions in San Diego. Balboa Park is the green lung of San Diego. This is where families gather for picnics, jogging or sports and where older people take a walk. The park offers many green spaces, water features and a few as opposed to the center of San Diego better air to breathe Sinn ???
**, where** you can relax. Moreover, the famous zoo and several museums are located in the park. Flower lovers will enjoy specially designed gardens. Now I will tell you something about the crime situation in San Diego San Diego is one of the safest cities in California. Nevertheless, you should still take the same precautions as in other cities of comparable size. Walks through South East San Diego or the Barrio Logan - near or even under the Coronado Bridge - at night should be avoided because these are the most dangerous neighborhoods in the city. As for gang crime, it also exists in San Diego, but it cannot be compared with that in Los Angeles.
Du solltest dich unbedingt noch einmal mit der Satzstellung im Englischen befassen:
Auch unter folgendem Link findest du Regeln und Übungen zur Satzstellung (S-P-O):
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar_list/satz.htm
Von mir hier nur so viel:
Die Satzstellung im Englischen ist in einem einfachen Satz:
S-P/V-O (Subjekt-Prädikat/Verb-Objekt)
Beispiel:
I (Subjekt) write (Prädikat/Verb) a letter (Objekt).
Für Sätze mit Zeit und Ortsangabe gilt:
(Zeit) S-P/V-O (Subjekt-Prädikat/Verb-Objekt)-Ort-(Zeit)
Beispiel:
Every day (Time) Jill(Subject) reads (Predicate/Verb) a book (Object) in her room (Place) in the evening.
Gibt es in einem Satz 2 Zeitangaben, steht die detailliertere zuerst.
We eat at one o'clock on Monday.
Für längere, komplizierter Sätze mit zusätzlichen adverbialen Bestimmungen (Ort, Zeit usw.) kann man diese Formel wie folgt verlängern:
(Z) - S - P - O – AOZG =
Zeit (kann am Satzanfang stehen) - Subjekt - Prädikat - Objekt - adverbiale Bestimmungen in der Reihenfolge: Art und Weise, Ort, Zeit, Grund (z.B. because).
I (= Subjekt) think you should wear(= Prädikat)
this dress (= Objekt) more often (= Art und Weise).
Tipps und Wendungen zu englischen Präsentationen findest du in der Schreibschule bei ego4u.de.
Um den Inhalt habe ich mich nicht gekümmert.
Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
AstridDerPu
Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat und danke für das Sternchen!
:-) AstridDerPu
*near the border to Mexico
*The Pacific beaches are popular because of their good surfing conditions. (bisschen umgeschrieben)
*The city has become one of the most important..... in recent years.
*"Enterprises" anstatt "firms"
*Today nicht To date
San Diego is the second largest city in the U.S. state of California and the seventh largest in the United States. The city has 1.28705 million inhabitants and is located in southwestern California, near the border TO Mexico. San Diego is the capital of the district, the San Diego County. Due to its pleasant climate, is called by its inhabitants, like San Diego as America's finest City?????. The Pacific beaches ARE POPULAR AT surfing enthusiasts. San Diego is more than ONLY a surfer's paradise. The city has become one of the most important centers of telecommunications and biotechnology industries IN RECENT YEARS. San Diego is one of many cities in the United States. In San Diego English and Spanish is spoken USUALLY . Firms often work in both languages, and most companies employ bilingual employees. The third most important language in San Diego is the Tagalog. This circumstance is related to the large Filipino community in the city. Here there are many entertainment options as well as shopping trips. ToDAY???, the city is still not as well known as New York or Los Angeles, but this will change anytime soon. Everyone (ZUSAMMEN) has heard of the major attractions in San Diego. Balboa Park is the green lung of San Diego. This is where families gather for picnics, jogging or sports for older people to simply take a walk. The park offers many green spaces, water features and a few as opposed to the center of San Diego better air to breathe. Here you can relax VERY WELL. In the park, the famous zoo and several museums are located. Flower lovers will enjoy specially designed gardens.
Now I'LL tell you something aboute the crime situation
San Diego is one of the safest cities in California. Of course you STILL should take the same precautions as in other cities of comparable size. Walks through South East San Diego or the Barrio Logan - near or even under the Coronado Bridge - at night should be avoided because these are the most dangerous neighborhoods in the city. As for the gang crime, it also exists in San Diego, but it is impossible to compare with thE ONE in Los Angeles.
alles was meiner meinung falsch war, habe ich groß geschrieben :) außerdem finde ich, dass das ende ein bisschen zu abrupt ist, vielleicht noch un petit résumé ... sonst ist er ganz gutt ;)
Danke :)