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The Text “Drop Dead, Warlock!” By David Sedaris is about his life as a young gay teenager and the more or less bad time he had until it improved a lot.
In the beginning he tells about his experiences as a gay teenager in North Carolina. He is upset about what it means to call someone a queer. In his youth being gay was like something the most people didn’t even know. You couldn’t find any information about homosexuality. So as a consequence he believes that he is the only homosexual in the world. He explains that being gay was like being an animal that was born in captivity. You know nothing about the others and whether you are alone or not. Furthermore he mentions that it has to be much easier for a gay Noe, because he knows he is not alone. In his opinion anyone is getting harassed for something, but being gay is sometimes a reason why you are taunted. So his main message is that anyone is pained by something, but it gets better when you grow up. He would have not believed that anything he wished when he was younger has fulfilled.
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Den einleitungssatz würde ich bisschen ändern : the short story/the extract from..; written by..
Und du brauchst mehr connectives etc.
Denn für die werden auch Punkte gezählt.
Ich denke schon, jedoch weiß ich nicht was der Lehrer bei euch für Anforderungen stellt.
Wenn du meinst es reicht, dann wird es wohl auch reichen. Wie gesagt: Ich kann hier nur vermuten.