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Report on the opinions of children's Greenfield Library users

On 12 September 2021, all older children, who are using the children's library, and adults accompanying younger children, have been asked to write down any comments they wished to make and propose improvements to what was provided to them in Greenfield Public Library.

About 300 users answered (212 older children & 88 adults).

Some adults and children complained of times of opening. Concerning times of opening, at present Children’s Library opens 1 hour after Main Library & closes 1 hour before the Main Library. In addition, users want us to open and close at the same time.

Regarding complaints, lack of space to study, besides, older children want to do homework and because that one table with only six chairs, are not completely enough. They ask, too, if we can open a separate study-room because the Present Children’s library is far too small.

Some older children & adults are not satisfied. Concerning causes, 1- lack of computer facilities, 2- users have to ask a member of staff for permission in order to use the photocopier. In addition, older children complain of noise from younger children and from adults. Regarding solutions, more computers, easier use of Photocopier, and almost everyone from adults agreed with facilities for younger children.

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