Hallo,
ich schreibe bald eine Englisch Klausur, in der wir eine Argumentation schreiben sollen. Deshalb würde ich gerne Tipps hören, wie ich meine Argumentation verbessern könnte. Die Argumentation geht über das Them Hobbys und darüber, ob man welche haben sollte oder nicht.
There are so many Activities you can do in your spare time like football, Volleyball or chess. That is one of the reasons why many students ask themselves wether or not they should get a hobby. Is it really worth it? That’s what today’s argumentation is about. I would first like to look at the reasons why a Hobby is not a good idea.
Firstly one might take the Hobby too serious and stress themselves too much because for example they want to be the best in their team. Secondly a Hobby is really expensive, you have to pay money if you want to be in an official Team and the clothes and equipment are expensive too. If it’s a competitive sport you would also spend a lot on gas when driving to different plays all over the state/maybe even country. And finally, a hobby takes a lot of time. Every hobby takes effort and time so if one is already stressing a lot in school, a hobby might not be the best decision.
But there’s also another way of looking at it. Hobbies help you meet new people and make new friends, mostly in your team. Since a lot of sports are played in a team, a hobby would also strengthen your teamwork and the skill to work with new people. Furthermore if you have a hobby you enjoy, it is also a great way to escape the everyday life and have fun. For example after a hard school day and a lot of homework your hobby could make you relax and make you forget about all the stress you’ve had, it would also give your body diversity of sitting the whole day and straining your brain with school.
After hearing both sides of wether or not you should have hobbies I’ve come to the decision that a hobby is really something that could help you a lot, especially when you’re trying to get out of your everyday life and want to calm yourself down while having a lot of fun.
Dankeschön für die schnelle Antwort