Englisch Traumberuf

Hallo! Ich muss für Englisch eine Zusammenfassung über einen Beruf schreiben. Ich habe schon eine geschrieben.. Wie findet ihr diese? Bitte auf Fehler hinweisen! Danke

My dream job is a nursery-school teacher. They works in a nursery school and looks after kids from 0-6 years. Their job is the childs spends time and their talents supports. I like this job because I love children. A nursery school teacher erans 1500 euro. In three months I will go to the Bakip. There I get a education for a nursery -scholl teacher and besides the examination . So I can, when I want study.

1 Antwort

Isa2412

05.06.2012, 16:53

Hallo xDDlala hier steht, was mir aufgefallen ist: my dream is to be a nursery school teacher (ohne bindestrich) they work, they look (he, she, it, das -s muss mit, aber nicht bei 3. person plural) kids from zero to six years ( in aufsätzen immer alles ausschreiben, dann bist du auf der sicheren seite, zahlen ab 12 kannst du aber in ziffern schreiben ;) Their job is to spend time with the children and to support their talents. (so ist der satz richtig) to earn (nicht erans) bakip (erkläre am besten noch, was das bakip ist oder schreib seinen kompletten namen) education (heißt so viel ich weiß erziehung sag lieber: There I can learn, what a nursery school teacher has to do and I can also get practical knowledge) (deinen letzten staz verstehe ich nicht, besser gesagt ich weiß nicht, was du damit sagen wolltest) Insgesamt ganz in ordnung, meiner meinung nach. Ich hoffe meine Antwort war hilfreich (das ist meine erste :P) Isa2412

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