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Muss heute mittag nen 2-3 min Referat über Colorado USA machen. Hab im Internet nicht so viele Informationen gefunden und wollte fragen ob ihr mir irgendwas sagen könnt. Des is echt wichtig :S Hab bis jetzt grade mal des : Hab sowas noch nie gemacht und hab keine ahnung obs gut oder eher schlecht ist...
Today I tell you something over Colorado. Colorado is a state in the western part of the United States of America. He belongs to the highly states of the USA. He is called the Centennial State. The capital is Denver, it live more than half of the 5 million inhabitants of Colorado. In Denver there is the Rocky Mountain-national Park, it is a nice park with many animals and plants. The Park is fast 100 jears old. In and around the Rocky Mountain-national Park lie many lakes of Colorado, outside is the Grand Lake of German means that Der große See. The Grand lake is the biggest and most natural lake of Colorado. The climate is warm or hot in summer and cold winters with many snow. The temperatures between day and night are extreme. So it is warm on the day and At night is sometimes very cold. Many people come to Colorado to become rich. In Colorado there are nearly 40 casinos with slot machines and game of chance tables.
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today I would like to tell you about Colorado. Colorado is on of the 52 states of North America. The capital of Colorado is Denver, and has a population of over 5 million people. Denver is a popular tourist attraction because of its beautiful rocky mountain park which has many animals, plants and flowers. The park is almost 100 years old. You can also see the grand lake, it is the biggest natural lake in Colorado. The climate is hot during the summer months and quite cold during the winter months with a lot of snow. The temperatures between day and night are extreme. Many people visit colorado in the hope that they might become rich through gambling . There are approximately 40 casinos full of slot machines and game tables.
die beste antowrt hast du dafuer definitiv nicht verdient. wer denn ?? Here is a link where you can print out maps of NORTH AMERICA with 52 States. I know There are 50 stars on the flag, one for each State. Apart from that, all I done was corrected the spelling and grammatic mistakes. Rocky mountains do have parks and for all I care it could be in Switzerland. Maybe there are 42 casinos ?? Concentrate on helping people and not criticizing
Dein Kurzreferat enthält recht viele Fehler, hier nur ein paar korrigiert: Colorado (= it!) is one if the mountain states of the USA. The capital is Denver. More than half of the Colorado population lives there. - The park is almost 100 years old. ....
Wenn ich bei Google.com "Colorado" eingebe, dann bekomme ich 178 Millionen Treffer. Toptreffer ist das Tourismusbüro von Colorado. Wenn Du behauptest, Du hättest nicht ausreichend Informationen gefunden, um eine Dreiminutenpräse über Colorado zu halten, dann ist das wirklich lachhaft.
Inhaltlich ist es gar nicht so übel, in der Rechtschreibung sind ein paar Schwächen, aber die Grammatik ist absolut nicht hinnehmbar!
Ein Staat kann niemals "he" sein. Natürlich muss es "it" heißen. Man schreibt auch "Its capital is Denver, where more than half of Colorado's five million citizens live."
"Therefore, it is warm during the day and sometimes very cold at night."
"...Rocky Mountain National Park that is a nice park..."
Die Zeiten sind nicht so sehr das Problem, aber die Satzstellung z. B.
schlecht!! almost = fast, zeiten passen nicht!!!!!!!!!
today iam going to tell you something about................
und so weiter zeiten passen nicht, wörter teilweise falsch
die beste antowrt hast du dafuer definitiv nicht verdient.