Würde ich eine eins für mein comment bekommen?

Hey, würde mich gerne freuen wenn ihr mir eventuell Verbesserungsvorschläge gibt :) Vor allem bin ich mir bei meiner conclusion nicht sicher

Danke!

Should the British monarchy be abolished? 

Lots of people argue about whether the British monarchy should be abolished or not since the Queen recently died. 

Therefore, I will list arguments for and against the monarch so that you can form your own opinion. 

On one hand, a monarch is seen as a representative of the country.

That is, he or she embodies traditional national values, unity and history.

This leads to stronger national identification and brings people closer together. 

That is why many people say that a monarchy brings stability.

In addition, members of the royal family have important roles at the head of all kinds of charities, and because of their image and popularity, they help charities continue their good work. 

Another positive aspect is that the British monarchy has shown that it is able to reform and adapt to modern times. An example of this would be that Prince Charles was allowed to marry a divorced women. 

It can also be said that the queen or king is perhaps the most expensive monarch in Europe, but that does not mean that a president would be cheaper.

On the other hand, the monarch has no real political power, which means that his or her functions are mainly formal and could easily be taken away by other political bodies or an elected president. 

Although many members of the Royal Family head charities they do not really engage in political work for those charities but rather serve as a kind of figurehead. 

But it is precisely a monarchy that harms democracy, because the people cannot elect the head of state. 

Also, a monarch has no consequences to face when making mistakes and since Britain is a hereditary monarchy, nobody knows whether the next monarch will have good or bad intentions. 

Therefore, it can be said that the royal family is a symbol of an unjust and unequal society. 

 

Weighing the pros and cons one come to the conclusion that the monarchy has many positive sides, for example, it brings stability or embodies history, but the negative sides mask this.

because since the country is a democracy, the monarchy should be abolished so that people can choose for themselves who should be the next monarch so that there is equality. 

Englisch, Abitur, English-Grammar, Grammatik, Queen, Student, summary, comment, Englisch Leistungskurs
Ist das eine gute persuasive essay (Englisch Ersatzleistung Klasse 7 )?

Why you should play tennis 🎾

 

Tennis is a wonderful sport and I think more people should  play it. There are many reasons why people should play tennis. The first reason is that tennis is a great way to make new friends. You can easily go to the park or a tennis court and just ask someone if she or he would like to play some tennis with you and become friends with her or him. Another important thing is that tennis is a lifetime sport. I’ve seen 65 year old people still playing pretty well. Think about it this way, when you are old would you rather spend your hole life in front of a small window in a retirement home ? Or would you rather enjoy your life, by playing tennis and having fun? You’re probably still thinking that tennis is like any other sport and and that it’s nothing special. But do you know that tennis reduces stress. People who play tennis can deal with physical, mental and emotional challenges, which also helps to deal with stress. Soccer players can also deal with physical problems but they can’t deal with mental and emotional challenges. Because as a soccer player you are in a team and sharing the pain with the others. Tennis players are on their own and if they lose it's their fault.  Not the fault of the others, only their own fault.  It's like when a soccer player gets the blame from the hole team for losing the match. I also play tennis. I love this sport because after you have lost you work even harder than before and whether your next match is a loss or a victory you will feel the hard work you put into it. Tennis not only strengthens your mentality, it also makes your body stronger and you can live longer, get fitter and improve your hand eye coordination through this sport.  An hour of singles play can burn 580-870 calories and if you have 3 hours of training every week, you will even live longer! The fifth reason to play tennis is that tennis improves your brain power. it has been proven that the more you repeat an activity, the  stronger the neural connections in your brain will become. So when you play tennis, for which you need critical thinking and quick movements, you are improving your planning, tactical, agility, and coordination skills. Finally, the most important reason is that tennis teaches you a lot of lessons. Every tennis match is a small life lesson. It teaches you about hard work and how to believe in yourself. Through independence , endurance, confidence and determination, tennis teaches you how to be successful. I hope my text persuaded you! And hopefully I’ll see you on the tennis court one day!

Sport, Arbeit, Englisch, Schule, Tennis, Text, school, English-Grammar, Hausaufgaben, Essay, Ersatzleistung
describe a cartoon?

Hey Leute, meine Aufgabestellung lautet: describe the picture and discuss the truth about this stereotype in a text of min. 100 words on your own.

Habe ich es richtig beschrieben? Habt ihr Änderungs-Verbesserungvorschläge?

On this cartoon we can see two situations: on the first one we see a man drowning and another man walking his dog on the path walk. The drowning man is asking for help but the man with the dog doesn't even bother to look at him. On the second one we have the same situation, but, this time, the man with the dog actually helps the other man. The difference is that this time, the drowning man is polite when he asks for help and that made all the difference. Instead of just shouting for help, he said: "Excuse me, Sir. I'm terribly sorry to bother you, but I wonder if you would mind helping me a moment, as long as it's no trouble, of course.". This cartoon portrays the British's politenes. Of course that in real life no one would be so polite when drowning; we would just shout "help" like the man in the first situation. But, we have to face it: British are more polite than everybody else. I'm not saying that the ones who aren't British are inferior or less educated, but it's true that they often forget words like "please" and "thank you". On this cartoon being polite makes the difference between life and death. It may be a little extreme, but who knows if it may or may not come true. So, if you happen to have a son, a daughter, a student who misbehaves and has lack of politeness, or if you just want them to be even more polite or educated than what you taught them to br, send them to England. Undoubtedly, they would thank you. At least, I know I would.

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Englisch lernen, Englisch, Schule, Cartoon, Englisch-Deutsch, englische Grammatik, Englischunterricht, English-Grammar, Bildbeschreibung, Diskussionsrunde
Habe ich meine Englisch Aufgaben richtig bearbeitet?

Hey Leute, ich würde mich echt freuen, wenn mal jemand raufschauen könnte😊!

Material:

Aufgaben:

1. Make a table with the statistics and pledges for the four countries.

Meine Lösung:

 2. State in a short text, what the oaths and pledges have in common and how they differ.

Lösung: The differences between the two ideologies is striking. If one swears an oath to the Constitution, it implies limited government by definition. It also implies that individual rights are paramount in the American system of governance. But when one swears to support the government instead of the Constitution, those principles disappear. An oath is self-pledging by which a subject or citizen acknowledges a duty of allegiance and swears loyalty to the monarch or country. In republics, modern oaths are sworn to the country in general or to the country's constitution.                                                                                                                   Also, this is a formal and serious promise to tell the truth or do something an offensive or rude word used to express anger, frustration, surprise, etc. Oath, as mentioned above, can mean either a formal promise or an insulting word. Additionally, an oath is more often used when the person making the promise calls God as a witness to the event, such as in the Boy Scout Promise. This often comes with a price if not kept; this can be death. In my personal opinion, an oath is presented as the most "serious" of the three words. In contrast to Oath, Pledge is a serious promise or agreement a promise to give money and something you leave to another person to show that you will keep your promise.                   Pledge is much less formal. Similarly, the Pledge of Allegiance is a promise of loyalty to one's country. Often, the pledge refers to an amount of money that someone is willing to give to another person.

3. Which of the countries’ oath is the most agreeable to you? Explain why.     The United States of America: Oath of Allegiance is the most agreeable oath to me because this serves to remind us that the United States is a constitutional republic with a federal system. The Oath also reminds us that the Constitution is the cornerstone of the American system. The government is supposed to be bound by the Constitution. As such, the government is not omnipotent, but strictly limited to the functions and purposes enumerated in the Constitution. Legislation, no matter how popular, is to be consistent with it, and any laws that conflict with it are invalid. 

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Englisch lernen, Englisch, Sprache, Englisch-Deutsch, englische Grammatik, English-Grammar, Englischsprachig, english-deutsche übersetzung
Mein englisch Text überprüfen?

Ich sollte eine summery schreiben und ich wollte fragen , ob jemand schauen könnte , ob mein Text die Kriterien der Zeit(present tense, present perfect, future tense)erfüllt und die Rechtschreibung überprüfen könnte. Wäre super dankbar:)

The book excerp The Meeting from the novel Go Well, Stay Well is written by Toeckey Jones in 1979 deals with the topic of racism, contempt and skepticism towards the dark in the past it is told about a girl who is injured. Her dark-skinned girl helps her. At first she is suspicious of the girl and only because of her skin color.

Candy was a white girl one day went for a walk, twisted her ankle. A black girl helped her, Candy thought she wanted to steal from her and would rather have a white person help her. When they laughed together they were looked at strangely. They then went to the park where the dark-skinned helped her to sit on the grass. when the dark-skinned woman had the chance to steal from her while Candy dropped the bag she didn't, she worried about Candy( her ankle). Candy started to like her and they "befriends". They wanted to go and drink something together, but the dark-skinned woman was not allowed to go into any coffee bar because she was black. They talked. Candy called her father to pick her up. The father picked up Candy, didn't really pay attention to the dark-skinned girl and then he wanted to pay her for being so nice to his daughter. The dark-skinned woman refused the money.

Englisch, Allgemeinwissen, Schule, Sprache, Text, English-Grammar, Korrektur, summary, Ausbildung und Studium
Kann jemand für mich diesen Text in englisch übersetzen?

Hey ich muss für die Schule einen kleine Zusammenfassung meines Praktikums schreiben. Ich hab es allerdings erst um 21 Uhr erfahren da ich die letzten Tage krank war. An sich ich es nicht schlimm aber mir geht's immer noch nicht so gut und ich habe starke Kopfschmerzen und den Text jetzt noch in Englisch zu übersetzen wäre einfach zu viel für mich. Mein englisch ist an sich jetzt auch nicht das beste und über google Übersetzer wäre es einfach komplett falsch und es würde auch auffallen. Ich wäre euch echt dankbar 😅

Der Text:👇

Heute möchte ich euch etwas von meinem Praktikum erzählen.

Ich habe mein Praktikum im "Ameos Klinikum am Seepark Geestland" im Zeitraum vom 10.02-21.02.2020 absolviert und meine Erwartungen wurden größtenteils erfüllt. Ich durfte viele Aufgaben erledigen und hab mich sehr gut mit den Kollegen verstanden.

Ich habe jeden Tag von 7:15 bis 13:30 gearbeitet und hatte 1,5 Stunden Pause.

Mein Praktikum fand auf der Station 1b statt die sich mit der Kinder- und Neurolokopädie und allgemeiner Orthopädie befasst. Auf dieser Station sind alle Alterklassen vorhanden. Von Säuglingen bis zu Rentnern. Es gibt auch Patienten die körperlich oder geistig beeinträchtigt sind. Auf der Station werden auch "Ambulante" Operationen durchgeführt das bedeutet, dass dieses Patienten noch am gleichen Tag das Krankenhaus verlassen.

Die Krankenpfleger/Schwestern, Ärtze und Physiotherapeuten waren alle sehr nett, haben uns Praktikanten vieles gezeigt und uns gut in den Job als Krankenpfleger hineingezogen.

Meine Hauptaufgaben bestanden daraus, neue Betten zu holen und die alten ins bettenlager zurück zu bringen, Patienten zu helfen wenn sie geklingelt hatten, Frühstück und Mittagsessen zu verteilen, Blutdruck/Puls/Temperatur zu messen und Kühlakkus zu reinigen.

Jetzt am Ende meines Praktikums kann ich sagen, dass es kein geeigneter Job für mich ist. Es ist zwar sehr spannend und es gibt vieles interessantes zu sehen aber für mich wäre diese Arbeit nicht. Das hab ich daran gemerkt, dass als ich beeinträchtigte Menschen helfen musste einige Komplikationen entstanden. Zu dem musste ich manchmal Patienten waschen und hatte dabei Angst etwas Falsches zu tun und den Patienten zu verletzen. Ich hab großen Respekt vor den Menschen die diesen Job haben und bin glücklich trotzdem einen so guten Eindruck bekommen zu haben.

Englisch, Schule, Deutsch-Englisch, English-Grammar, Ausbildung und Studium
(Aufsatz English) An online friendship is no substitute for real friends. What is your opinion?

Guten Abend zusammen

Könnte jemand bitte diesen Text korrigieren und allfällige grammatikalische Fehler korrigieren?

Außerdem, ist der Text gut zum Titel oder hat jemand Verbesserung Vorschläge?

Ich danke bereits im Voraus :)

 

For most people, real friends are one of the most important things in their life. You're in contact with your friends everyday. If you are in trouble they'll always try to help you. However in this century, a lot of children play online games and meet new people online. But are they really as good as real friends? 

 

When thinking about what a real friend represent, I come to the conclusion, that I'm 100% sure what looks like. I mostly know people from his family and where he lives. 

 

But if I meet somebody online, I usually don't know what he looks like and also if he's that guy and if he's who he pretends to be. You can find so many news, where kids meet a strangers online and they plan to meet outside somewhere. Because the strangers pretend to be also a kid, the other one gets kidnapped by the stranger. 

 

There are not only bad sides to online friendships. After my experience can I tell, there are a lot of good people online. I have a lot of online friends with whom I've been in contact with for years. We text almost every day! 

 

In my opinion there are a lot of good people online to be friends with. But there are also a lot of bad people. Online friends can replace real friends but they also can be dangerous. That's why the most important thing is your safety. Don't just give your address to strangers that you just met online and became friends. If you want to meet your online friend, make sure you know what he looks like and meet him in a public place at day time. 

Englisch lernen, Englisch, englische Grammatik, English-Grammar, Korrektur, englisch text

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