Hi, isch schreibe eine Projektarbeit und schreibe einen eigenen Song.
Was ich gerne machen möchte, ist ein Interview zu machen, mit einem Experten, also Songwriter oder Musikproduzent, und habt ihr Tipps, wo man solche Leute finden kann?
Meine 2 Frage wäre, wie ihr diesen Songtext findet, denn ich geschrieben habe? (nicht fertig) ist auch nicht der erste.
Verse 1.
I felt ashamed be out there. I felt i didn‘t belong in here, in this colorless cloudy evoiroment. Who i wanted to give a new coat, but had been stoped all the time, instead i‘d been put in boxes and closed away, and had been forgotten down here.
Refrain:
felt the presure down herr. (Had) been stabbed so many times but always had been healed, but allways been broken. So i just try and make my things with my broken heart.
Verse 2.
Never felt arrived in here, been in the wrong place. always did other things than i had planed. Were obly told what to do and how to do. Never did my own thing, to show my talent. My only audience had been my plush toys, who always listend to me. Felt so lost in this big world, never found the spot where i can belong.
Refrain:
felt the presure down herr. (Had) been stabbed so many times but always had been healed, but allways been broken. So i just try and make my things with my broken heart.
Bridge:
Learned how to handle it, but it wasen‘t that easy, never gonna trust anyone up here again, they always hab been tolden lies.
like you did, we always gonne be together, but it never happend bevor an after and it will never ever gonna happend, because i am gonne, never listen to you again. You made my heart bleeding, the Wound big, in time it healed where i found my self again. Reflectet why i was blen in this beautiful world. So i just make my thing now, you making yours, but we never talk again anymore, you told enough lies.
So i will put my collr stripe behind me, bring this light back to life, even if i do it with my broken heart, who had been stabed so many times, but grown over it now, keeping my heart alive with my optimism.
Bridge 2:
laying now here knew my big time will vome, where i can shin, showing my best of mine rid of all the plush toys.
Getting out of the way of the Chaos that ruels. Taking in any negative news, but will flrget it directly, my focus is standing for the positivies.
Now you can get out of my way, you standing in my way, you already broken the stages lights, now i am here to rebuild it, doing it with my own class now.
So i whould do anything, what i want, even with a broken heart.