Könnte jemand meine englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren?

Ich sollte einen Essay schreiben. Vielen Dank für deine Hilfe ! :)

Always live for the moment and never worry about tomorrow.

Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.

Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and don’t be worried about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting is recommended to think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.

On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena . It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.

In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the find the middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.

2 Antworten

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Hausaufgaben

23.04.2021, 19:57

Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about (---) next day‘s problem.

Firstly, it is nice to enjoy (---) life and don’t be (Grammatik) worried about the consequences but on (Wort) the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is recommended to (Wendung) think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.

On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena (Grammatik). It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants (Komma) you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.

In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the (Wort) find the middle way. You can enjoy (---) life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

lilkooo

Beitragsersteller

24.04.2021, 08:57

Danke für deine Korrektur ! Ich verstehe sie aber vielmals nicht.

and don’t be (Grammatik) worried ?

(Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is recommended to (Wendung) think about the ?

overthinking is a huge phenomena (Grammatik). ?

the best thing you can do is the (Wort) find the middle way. ?

Wenn du Zeit und Lust hast, könntest du sie korrigieren, leider kann ich nicht draufkommen, wo meine Fehler liegen.

GameFragen897

23.04.2021, 19:05

Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.

Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and to have ho worries about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting it is recommended to think about the action's consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.

In my opinion, the best thing you can do is to find a middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.

Bin erst zwölf und kann deshalb den Text nicht so gut korrigieren bin aber Muttersprachlerin

Woher ich das weiß:eigene Erfahrung – Bin Muttersprachlerin

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